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PostSubject: Morphine (death by Anderpwn, other)   Wed Nov 03, 2010 8:01 am

Death: Killed during the Millennium invasion on the Hellsing mansion, having sustained many injuries and ultimately being stabbed through the heart by Anderson's bayonet.

Have you see the OVA or read the manga series of Hellsing?  If so how far have you gotten?  If not please direct your attention to youtube, and watch OVA 1-4 at least.  Warning: If you have watched the anime we require you watch the OVA, or read the manga.  The anime is not canon.  This is not our opinion.  This is the law set down by the creator of Hellsing, Kouta Hirano. Finished all 10 manga

Name: Alexis Emil nickname: Morphine

Age: 65 (looks like hes in his early 20's due to prolonged aging)

Gender: Male

Physical appearance: stands hunched over, but full height is 6,10. Brown hair is always combed back. Medium built but arms are somewhat bulky, 6 pack underneath clothes. Weight is around 135 without gear. Eyes are dark Platinum, scar going from the top of left eye down across his face to his lower right lip.

Clothing of choice: Military greatcoat with SS officer uniform underneath. SS uniform is pitch black with a nazi armband around the left near where the elbow meets the shoulder. Military combat boots. In general public areas such as cities, wears white tank top shirt with gray cargo pants, but keeps military boots.

Weaponry of choice: MG42, MP44 (aka STG-44), stick grenades, mauser C96, panzerfaust

MG42
http://englerpaintballguns.com/catalog/images/mg42.jpg

MP44
http://operatorchan.org/k/arch/src/k71755_German%20WW2%20MP-44%20Erstes%20Sturmgewehr%2044%20in%20Kaliber.jpg

stick grenade
http://nsm88records.com/theshop/images/16205.jpg

Mauser C96
http://world.guns.ru/handguns/mauser_c96_9par.jpg

Panzerfaust
http://greyfalcon.us/panzerfaust.jpg

SS uniform
http://samods.org/staff/magic/articles/bw_campaign/uniform-ss_officers.gif

Race: special human

Abilities: Extreme speed (estimated around 175 around sprinting speed) and strength (around 600 lbs of push/pull/lift etc. weight), acute sense of smell and sight.

Organization: Millennium

Personality: Generally calm, but can be a smart ass and extremely violent at times. Doesn't talk much unless spoken to first. No known phobias or fears aside from losing the "family" he has now. Likes meat, the sound of war, screams of pain, rip van winkle and the other members of millennium, reading mystery novels. (surprising isn't it?)  Dislikes Hellsing, the Iscariot, people that are full of themselves, too calm of a place. He thinks nothing of killing others because he realized no matter how many people suffer or die, the world still keeps turning; therefore creating the diluted thought that the more people he killed, their life would be added to his own.

Rank: Hauptfeldwebel (Sergent major, will lower rank if it seems to high at request of administrators)

Biography: A man that has only known war. As a child Morphine was given his name for the amount of damage he would get from beatings by his parents and those around him and later from his service in the SS. Alexis had a thing for cruelty to others, even more so if he disliked a individual. A worker in the Illuminati and in the front lines, Emil had taken pleasure in his interrogations with others because he was given clearance to do whatever he saw fit to his victims. His hunger for violence grew in the months that passed by, whatever mess the SS had, he would clean up, weather it be slaughtering enemies, eating them alive, or lapping up the blood like a dog, he followed his orders to the letter. Though he acts hardened and like a smart ass sometimes, he is actually quite... "shy" when it comes to being around Rip Van Winkle, who he had taken a liking to after his first few assignments with her, but never admitted it to her. He had always thought of Captain Hans as a older brother to him. When the war came to a end, Alexis was trialed as a war criminal and set up for execution, however three days before his execution he broke out of prison, leaving a ocean of blood and a head full of rage in his wake. "How could his fellow men of the Reich turn on him?" he kept asking himself, until he came up with his own answer. "Because they have lost their grip on reality." he debated with himself.

When he had escaped form prison, he spent the next 20 years looking for the major and the rest of his comrades. Once he had reunited with them, his passion for Rip Van Winkle started up again, though he is still embarrassed of confessing to her. As the years with Millennium passed, he had started to practice Muay Thai and already knew commando sambo. The blood lust of Emil still lingers today, only a handful of people have been able to keep him in check, which is the Major, Doktor, Captain Hans, and Rip Van Winkle, even if she doesn't know it. His love for war is almost equal to that of the majors, but obviously the major's love for war can not be surpassed. During his time during the war, he went to japan on a special trip to meet with the emperor and was given a katana, still battle ready which he keeps in his room. Why he holds onto that sword so tightly is unknown, perhaps because he knows that his fellow brothers and arms on the pacific lost the war as he did. To lose a war to what was deemed inferior species was an unacceptable thought.

RP sample: The year was 1945, somewhere around the arctic circle, the beast waited in his dark room on board the battleship that had been frozen there for the past few days. The sound of gunfire echoed through the ship. Sudden the door broke open as a russian carrying a PPSH-41 had entered the room, the soviet soldier raising his PPSH-41 at the man in the chair. The monsters eyes shifted up to the russian aiming the sub machine gun at him. Morphine's eyes filled with rage. He let our a loud yell at the human, "Do NOT point zat veapon at me, russian DOG!" He quickly grabbed the barrel and bent it, raising his right leg and thrusting it forward. The moment his boot made the impact on the russian, the force from it had thrown the russian into the wall and turned him into what looked like red jelly on the wall. Morphine smirked at the sight, remembering the feeling of taking another persons life again. The feeling was one that he could not pass up. He bared his teeth and grew a psychopathic smirk across his face.

The madman stepped out of the room and wrapped his arms behind a russian beside railing and covered his mouth, that sadistic grin across his face became wider. Pulling out one of the stick grenades from his side pouch, he pulled the pin and shoved it into the mouth of the russian and threw him over the railing. With a loud thud, the body stuck the metal floor in front of a russian squad below. "The fuck?" responded one of the russians, as they all moved in close to their fallen comrade, then suddenly came a large explosion, shrapnel cutting through flesh, a beautiful sight to the mad wolf. The monster walked out of the large crack in the as of now deserted, froze in "sunken" ship, only to find a battalion of russians waiting outside for him. This however did not stop the warmonger. In fact, it gave him a even greater feeling that there were just that many more people to kill. Morphine walked towards the large crowed and opened his arms, smiling kindly at the russians. His expression suddenly snapped back into that cold, psychopathic look, this hunting "wolf" if you could call him that, cracking his knuckles, grinned as he walked towards the group of soldiers; only saying three words. "Guten tag gentlemen."


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PostSubject: Re: Morphine (death by Anderpwn, other)   Wed Nov 03, 2010 9:26 am

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PostSubject: Re: Morphine (death by Anderpwn, other)   Wed Nov 03, 2010 1:51 pm

sorry, typo
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PostSubject: Re: Morphine (death by Anderpwn, other)   Thu Nov 04, 2010 11:33 am

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PostSubject: Re: Morphine (death by Anderpwn, other)   Thu Nov 04, 2010 3:46 pm

A few things, one of the first being that I do not (generally) approve lycanthropes other than the Captain. However, I feel that I may be overruled in this situtation - I am not the only one with a vote - so I would like to give you a few pointers, if I may.

For starters, I would like to see a bit more on the description of yourself, your clothing, and your weaponry; although, I understand that the weaponry should be rather self-explanitory, perhaps a link or two to thier respective descriptions would be helpful. As for the clothing/physical descriptions, please give us a better idea of your character. Details are key; you have told us that he is tall, and bulky. What else? How much does he weigh? Does he have any outstanding features? Any scars? What colour are his eyes? These things aid us - and perhaps you as well - in understanding your character a bit more.

As for the clothing, I am certain many of us know what the SS uniforms look like, but for those who don't, explaning the general look and feel of the uniform would be nice. Also, what type of shoes does he wear, and does he ever choose to wear anything other than the uniform? Once again, give us a little more than these basics.

Your abilities need to be adjusted, as Rip has previously mentioned, and your personality needs much more than a couple of sentences. We understand from this description that he is a cookie-cutter 'quiet guy' with violent tendencies. More! Give us more description! Make this character stand out amongst a room full of similar characters, to not fall into the general category of 'useful but not noteworthy'. Dose he have any fears? What about desires? Likes? Dislikes? You mentioned in his biography that he feels affection for Rip Van Winkle; his personality section allows you to expound a bit more on this (assuming you have spoken with Rip about it).

Lastly, your biography is a bit muddled, and slightly confusing; I am not an authority on Millennium, so perhaps speaking with the Major, Rip, or the Captain would be a better option. However, I will say that there should be a little more than two paragraphs of information on a biography, and from the amount of information you throw at us, I have the feeling this section could be greatly expanded.

If you have any questions, I am afraid I would have to defer to one of the other administrators or moderators for the time being; I will be online only sporadically. But should you catch me, I am more than happy to discuss anything else about this character.
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PostSubject: Re: Morphine (death by Anderpwn, other)   Sun Nov 07, 2010 5:00 pm

Giselle presented many key points. I'd like to include a few more for you. first off, find an avatar to upload. You can work off of that for your physical appearance and add much detail. You can never be overly detailed as Giselle posted.

As for weapons, I love it. Its pretty swell. What you need to include though, is an explanation to them. By that, I mean does he carry all of these guns on him at all times? If he does, it might prove to get in the way all the time. Being a werewolf, you have an upper hand; you do not need to carry all of that on your person, though perhaps for selected missions.

As for personality, once again as Giselle and Rip said, you need to get into the finer detail. A good way to do this is asking yourself what your OC does in his spare time, what does he like to eat (besides scraps), what is his favorite book, does he like to annoy people (and how) etc etc. A lot of that is key into understanding more of a personality. Personality is also key.

What I did notice in your bio, is that you include many things that could be classified as personality ticks and traits.

As an example...
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He thinks nothing of killing others because he realized no matter how many people suffer or die, the world still keeps turning; therefore creating the diluted thought that the more people he killed, their life would be added to his own.
^THIS is a personality tick, and not necessarily needed in the bio.

For his race, I've got a suggestion (this can be presented astutely in the bio of your OC). You could go into detail that he was a subject to the werewolf project, which in theory, was around before the FREAK project. That also gives an explanation into his physical appearance later in the bio if you decide to include it. <THIS could potentially gain more approval votes for your sheet.

Need anything else Miro? Post questions in this thread and edit as you go. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Morphine (death by Anderpwn, other)   Sun Nov 21, 2010 12:01 pm

alright, profile fixed up
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PostSubject: Re: Morphine (death by Anderpwn, other)   Thu Dec 09, 2010 3:18 pm

I would like to thank you for fixing up (most) of the things we asked of you. However, I will be abstaining from voting, as I do not approve lycanthropes regardless of how good they are. As I have been encouraging your character to find more depth, I find it a bit hypocritical to disapprove him on technicality.
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PostSubject: Re: Morphine (death by Anderpwn, other)   Thu Dec 09, 2010 8:56 pm

I bet if you marked him as a Special Human, being from the werewolf project from the 20's/30's in Millennium, like I suggested, he would have a better chance of a pass.

As for now, I am going to have to disapprove till that can happen.

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PostSubject: Re: Morphine (death by Anderpwn, other)   Fri Dec 10, 2010 8:04 am

I decided to go along with your suggestion and turn him into a special human
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PostSubject: Re: Morphine (death by Anderpwn, other)   Sat Dec 11, 2010 10:13 am

All things considered it looks pretty good Morphine. However, him being a 1st lieutenant bothers me. Do me a favor and scale back the rank a little and you'll have my approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Morphine (death by Anderpwn, other)   Sun Dec 12, 2010 6:29 pm

Looks a lot better. Thanks. Smile

Changing my vote now.

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PostSubject: Re: Morphine (death by Anderpwn, other)   Sun Dec 12, 2010 7:07 pm

Thank you for making him a Special Human. I would love to approve!

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PostSubject: Re: Morphine (death by Anderpwn, other)   Sun Dec 12, 2010 8:15 pm

Approvals: 03

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PostSubject: Re: Morphine (death by Anderpwn, other)   Sat Dec 18, 2010 8:11 pm

Approvals: Four.
Disapprovals: Zero.
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PostSubject: The return of evil   Mon Jul 14, 2014 7:50 pm

I am using my one shot character redemption for the return of Hauptfeldwebel Morphine.
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PostSubject: Re: Morphine (death by Anderpwn, other)   Fri Jul 18, 2014 3:33 pm

Sorry the sheet hasn't been moved sooner but I'm on my mobile so it's a pain in the ass. Will one of the staff do this please?
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PostSubject: Re: Morphine (death by Anderpwn, other)   Sun Jul 20, 2014 9:57 am

OK...Staff. Any one of you could have went and found this sheet ya know. This is what I'm talking about. This was in here for a week until I got back around to it. Wth? Morph technically shouldn't because it was his character but there's no excuse for the rest of you considering you said nothing. Anyway. I'm approving the request and he's now back among the world of the living. Please try to RP this out and lemme know when you do if you can as I'm really curious how this will come out.
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