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Integra F. W. Hellsing
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|  Subject: Re: Elissa Mary (Michel) [Done] Sun Mar 08, 2015 6:40 pm | |
| Can you explain in detail how this cursed magic works on your character please? | |
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Bayman
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| | Subject: Re: Elissa Mary (Michel) [Done] Sun Mar 08, 2015 7:32 pm | |
| I'm sadly going to have to vote against it unless you change the sheet around as for the reason I stated above. If you expand on it, this can be subject to change but even then it's rather unlikely. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Elissa Mary (Michel) [Done] Sun Mar 08, 2015 10:36 pm | |
| What he said. Sorry for the wait. Give it a little more revision and structure like you did with your cyborg character and it will be fine. | |
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Jack
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| | Subject: Re: Elissa Mary (Michel) [Done] Mon Mar 09, 2015 5:08 pm | |
| Sorry busy day yesterday I forgot about revising the app and I will do what I can to change things and explain in detail how it all works. | |
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Jack
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| | Subject: Re: Elissa Mary (Michel) [Done] Thu Mar 19, 2015 7:17 pm | |
| I am done for now if I need to work on it more I will do so. Next time I am on after I see someone else has posted if need I will change what will be asked. | |
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Alexander Anderson
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| | Subject: sheet tweaks Fri Mar 20, 2015 7:53 pm | |
| I feel you need to say more of your cursed magic ability, it has no origin to speak of. For the weaknesses I see blindness, give more information if you can I'd like to "see" what you come up with.  keep it up though! | |
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Jack
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| | Subject: Re: Elissa Mary (Michel) [Done] Fri Mar 20, 2015 11:35 pm | |
| I have changed what I could to best fit the description of what you had asked of me. Is there anything else I need to change that the staff would like of me? | |
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| | Subject: Re: Elissa Mary (Michel) [Done] Tue Apr 07, 2015 4:48 pm | |
| My apologies for the long wait Jack. After reviewing this, while I'm honestly not too happy with it, you've been reasonable with your "Waffe Der Sehnsucht" thing so I'm willing to let you have your chance. You need one more approval for this though before it can pass.
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Alexander Anderson
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| | Subject: Re: Elissa Mary (Michel) [Done] Sun May 03, 2015 5:24 pm | |
| Welcome finally Jack.
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Integra F. W. Hellsing
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| | Subject: Re: Elissa Mary (Michel) [Done] Sun May 03, 2015 5:41 pm | |
| I know it seemed like we put you through a lot, but it seems it was worth it in the end. I'm excited for this character.
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Jack
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| | Subject: Re: Elissa Mary (Michel) [Done] Tue May 12, 2015 5:32 pm | |
| Sorry for my inactivity but I had things to do. Sadly I forgot about the site for a while after my family trouble had settled down a bit. Now that I am more focused that shouldn't be a issue from now on. Thanks for the approvals but until the app is moved I rather not use him as of yet. Sorry for my concern but I am paranoid by nature. | |
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