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PostSubject: Kiyala Finished   Wed Nov 12, 2014 7:40 pm

Have you see the OVA or read the manga series of Hellsing?  If so how far have you gotten?  If not please direct your attention to YouTube, and watch OVA 1-4 at least.  Warning: If you have watched the anime we require you watch the OVA, or read the manga.  The anime is not canon.  This is not our opinion.  This is the law set down by the creator of Hellsing, Kouta Hirano.

Name: Kiyala

Age: 120 years old

Gender: Female

Physical appearance:
Kiyala is an olive skinned woman with unique tribal markings wrapping around much of her torso and limbs but not reaching her face. She is a couple of inches below average but not too much where it's really noticeable. She has a curvy yet slender frame that is slowly decreasing in frame as she further works on her agility. Her hair color is raven black and when at home for an extended amount of time she typically will wear them in thick plaits. Her eyes color being green before becoming a vampire with a noted intensity to them.

Clothing of choice:
She typically prefers to wear her hair to mid-back length and whenever she can have a moment to herself; she typically expresses herself in a more girly attire but in public more appropriate wear. The inability to safely transverse in the light has greatly stifled her clothing options to night wear and clubbing attire. She has been known to wear various bracelets and earrings but not excessively as she prefers a more conventional over flashy look in public.

Weaponry of choice:
Twin Berrettas 92 Inox:
Their is nothing special about the guns themselves as Kiyala has never as a vampire had the connections to get any of her newer gear blessed themselves. However, the bullets are hollow tips with holy water inside while being coated in silver. The gun has the feature to be switched between multiple shots (up to three per pull) or the standard single shot. As a minor feature is should be noted how lightweight and efficient these guns are.

Tanto Swords:
Silver tanto blades with no other special features.


Race:
Category D Vampire

Abilities:
Regeneration may take a long amount of time for major damage (ie: 10 posts), sublime supernatural strength, agility, stamina, durability, and reflexes, big weakness to silver and blessed weaponry but survivable, kill able through conventional means, ability to turn virgins into vampires, non-virgins into somewhat weak ghouls, the need to drink blood occasionally, susceptible to unbleached damage (still fatal to them), meagre weakness to sunlight (as in they get sick around it).

Kiyala is especially talented with her tanto blades but should be also noted that this skill ranges in normal swords to staffs as well. She was trained well in me-lee weaponry but as such is weaker when it comes to shooting; which sounds laughable because she's a vampire but a part from supernatural skill a part of their ability is natural. However, she is also proficient in hand to hand fighting utilizing a mix of muay-thai with more common brawling and acrobatic techniques that simply better suit Kiyala's frame and fighting style.

Organization: Unaffiliated

Personality:
Kiyala by the people who've known her can be described as charismatic and someone who seems sure of themselves. As this is the act that she will put on in front of other people; she was never the type to simply open up to someone regardless of whether they could be considered a friend or not. If their willing to accept that then they would rather easily find themselves getting along with Kiyala. She doesn't like to speak about her past because not only does it completely kill her mood but she doesn't like sympathy from people and her story typically brings that out of normal people. She despite being rather reclusive has somewhat of a big heart towards things that appeal to it; be it a little orphan girl or people who can't fight for themselves. However, before you go painting Kiyala a hero keep in mind that these are only under best circumstances.

In a life of death situation, Kiyala's rather severe sense of self preservation kicks in. When put in a life or death situation; Kiyala will usually weigh her options and if they are not in her favor she will leave an ally, friend and even family member if they weren't particularly close. She will usually be apologetic about it but she will is not the type to risk her life needlessly. And to those who betray or seek to hurt her are the ones who truly see the true darkness that comes with being a vampire. When dealing with people she doesn't like she will at least initially attempt to be cordial but it does not take much pressure for her to unleash a cursing or violence spree. Kiyala also hold humans with little regard beyond those who happen to catch her eye; whether it's beauty, intellect, ability or an emotion. For those who Kiyala does truly care about and will sacrifice herself for; she has an extremely hard time dealing with their death or injury.



Rank: Occult Hunter/Bounty Hunter

Biography:
Kiyala was born in Compton, California on a rather sunny summer day around 2:00pm in the afternoon. Her mother was Natalia Rivercrest and her father named Thaddeus Malor. Before she Kiyala was born both her parents were hunters, while her mother only hunted vampires as part of her family heritage. Her father Thaddeus hunted all creatures whether human or non-human to a surprising degree. In truth, his reasoning for hunting supernatural was for personal reasons as his first daughter died by drained by a vengeful vampire Thaddeus could never kill named Arliana Dupree. She hailed from times before the establishment of America thus still having somewhat of a French accent that she has not been able to work herself out of. In truth, she had planned to drain Kiyala as a baby but upon trying the little girl managed to touch what was left of the vampire's revenge fueled heart. Softening it up enough for her to instead change her plans but not completely withholding the revenge Arliana believed her family deserved.

She watched Kiyala grow over the years, as she entered and exited primary school and entered secondary schooling  and started dealing with emotions, boys, girls and all other things that make a teenage girl what they are. Her mother mainly schooled her in training her as well as revealing the existence of supernaturals to her at a young age. However, she cautioned her that she was only training her so she'll be able to protect herself and not so she could follow her footsteps no matter how disgruntled that made their extended family. Her father could not teach her as he still wanted to believe she was his little girl and couldn't imagine being tough on her enough to shape her into a hunter. However, her mother knew enough to know that she would have to be pushed if she was going to live long in this life. Her mother accompanied her on her first hunt when she turned 16; which turned out to be rather uneventful as they worked through stealth and above all else overkill. While other may want to save bullets or cash saved on bullets they were taught until your clip was spent and the vampire or werewolf stopped moving that it was still alive.

They showered with none scent soap before hand and made sure to cover themselves in furs of a wolf. Kiyala was given the first shot and completely missed alerting the vampire. As it raced forward towards Kiyala, as it did her mother stood in front of her to ensure a shot. After ensuring her shot, she cocked back her shot gun loaded with silver bullets and holding a fine silver powder within them and fired without abandon towards the vampire. It took a few more shots but it was evident that the vampire was going to die. Kiyala's mother walked over and quickly pulled it's teeth out which served as proof when it came to receiving their payment.

When her father was told of her lack of proficiency with a gun, it was then that he finally took it upon himself to teach her his skill in me-lee combat. However, her father held back in strength which crippled her when it came to being used to pain but he didn't hold back on execution of technique which helped her properly learn the fighting principles. Though, she'd have to learn how a true fight felt from other hunters who either wanted a friendly spar or a couple of altercations between hunters of differing belief. Her mother of course did not approve of her further joining their lifestyle but knew at this point in her training that she'd have a better chance of helping her daughter then trying to stop her. By her 21 birthday, Kiyala was a huntress of her own accomplishments. Sure she was still only taking on level F and D vampires but most young hunters never lived long enough to face a D ranked vampire. Kiyala was very practical and with her awareness of her own weakness, she tried to always live by the principle of overkill because if she didn't then her life could be forfeit.

Through-out her whole life Arliana had been watching closely but from the shadows never once revealing herself. However, she did help Kiyala quite often as their had been missions where Kiyala was walking into a trap of multiple vampires and Arliana would cull a few of them simply to watch what Kiyala could do in a fair fight and seeing how worth it the girl truly was. What struck Arliana is that Kiyala did not seem to hunt out of hate as she didn't kill vampires or supernaturals that either didn't get in her way or that weren't apart of her mission. So when Kiyala found herself and four other hunters cornered by three level C vampire who had managed to either knock away or take all the damage they could deal out was when one of her worst traits finally showed themselves. You see Kiyala and the other managed to somewhat adequately barricade the last doorway protecting them but Kiyala found a way out. However, she knew if she told the others that it would make it easier for the vampires to follow them so instead she kept her mouth closed and quietly exited the rather sizable but ran down shack they were in.

Upon exiting and making way for the woods, Kiyala tripped but over someone's foot and not the forest life beneath her feet. As she tumbled to the ground, she immediately on instinct began to roll to her feet baring the sole tanto blade she had left. Arliana stood a few feet away from Kiyala barely stifling a laugh, her normally hazel eyes turning blood shot red for a moment. She praised Kiyala for placing her own existence above the others and said that she had the makings to be stronger in another life. Kiyala wasn't stupid so she was aware of what the woman was speaking of; so instead of answering she lashed out with her tanto. Arliana almost casually knocked it out of her hand before mounting the girl knowing she was a virgin as forced the blood exchange on Kiyala. She didn't intend to kill Kiyala for revenge but to turn her into what her family hunted would be revenge enough. Plus admittedly Arliana had grown fond of the girl over the past years and didn't want to see her completely dead.

Kiyala upon waking in horror of what she was wasted no time and feeding as she didn't see the point of delaying what she felt was inevitable. Her father was more welcoming of her but still couldn't stand the thought of his daughter being a vampire while his mother seemed to completely withdraw from life and ignore her daughter's existence. She was almost lulled into the since of killing herself with her father's aide until Arliana intervened by persuading Kiyala to simply run away with her. Kiyala seeing no life with her family or without someone to learn how to live as a vampire agreed to accompany Arliana begrudgingly. But how could Kiyala really leave her life and everything she knew in her hometown? She wasn't really given a choice as hunters had been followed Arliana's trail for quite some time and they weren't aligned with the family hunting that her mother did. Kiyala knew if her family was caught 'hiding' vampires they would be forever shamed and cut off. Also the prospect of being killed in her first days of unlife was not settling well with her at all.

The first couple of months, Kiyala bitterly followed Arliana which hindered her growth as a vampire and gotten them into trouble countless times. But the fact that Arliana never abandoned her or gave up on her began to wear on the girl's malice. And more than she would have liked at the time; did she start to see likable and even lovable traits in her sire. In truth, Kiyala was more than a little impressed with the woman's natural confidence and intellect. She taught Kiyala control in the first few years of their travels as they ended up in Washington DC. When Kiyala proved that she could properly control herself in public, she began teaching her small tricks to better fit in with the humans. This mostly consisted on being known but also not drawing at attention which meant feeding on opposite sides of town.

The hardest lesson for Kiyala to learn was the need to kill humans who might have either been too nosy or seen too much as Kiyala still held human in normal regards at this point. Arliana worked hard over the years to show Kiyala that they were a lesser species that only existed as food and to a point it worked with Kiyala. Instead, Kiyala found herself attracted to rare and beautiful things whether it was as shallow as looks or collecting 'pets' that she found to be rather useful. At first she wasn't strong enough to command respect from other vampires or werewolves so her interest were confined to talented or beautiful humans. However, this also fostered a healthy attraction to people of her same gender as she found beauty transcendent of gender now. Her first pet if she could be called that as Kiyala treats her as a child was found in her eightieth year as a vampire. A young orphan girl named Dawn who had managed to survive amongst orphan boys who at times would try to prey on the little money she had as they were still too young to be thinking of sex.

Kiyala adopted the child to the amusement of Arliana who in these days had become like an older sister to Kiyala. Kiyala had long ago seen that despite her flaws and completely messed up ways of expressing it; that the woman truly cared about Kiyala. Kiyala showered the young girl with love, affection and fine things as she grew up among the two vampires. Eventually it became time to tell her of the world that really existed around her and to her credit Dawn didn't seemed to worried about it all. In fact, she expressed interest in becoming like them so they could be together forever. At first Kiyala was completely against the idea because she did not want to corrupt Dawn as she had been corrupted herself. But then again, Kiyala never really considered herself to be an evil person merely realistic and practical. And as the years took their toll and Dawn was growing into a woman; Kiyala agreed to turn her on her 21th birthday if she still wanted to be a vampire.



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"Kiyala it is so nice to see you! It must have been years since I've last seen you. And you brought a snack too." The bouncer said looking hungrily at Dawn who stood closely behind her 'mother'. Kiyala's rather pleasant look on her face shifted into something more quiet and yet feral about them. Her hand striking out quickly gripping around the younger vampire's neck and lifting him off his feet. She moved him just out of of kicking range, thankful for her enhanced strength as the human version of her could never sustain such a weight in one hand. She made sure she gave the man a look to further bring out the seriousness of this situation.

"This is my daughter not food. If I see you ever look at her as less than an equal I'll end you quicker than you can attempt to flee." She marginally increased the pressure of her grip for effect knowing the vampire had no need to breath. "Now out of my way!" Without so much as a look she'd callously toss the bouncer out of her way as she took hold of Dawn's hand and lead her inside the underground night club. Some of the best vampire nightclubs were in the most remote of towns as governments typically did not care about backwater towns but since they left America for Europe; it had taken them quite some time to establish themselves enough to garner enough respect to survive on their own.

In truth, it was more so due to the eldest of them and her sire Arliana but Kiyala would like to think that she was growing into a rather strong vampire as well. Such thoughts drew her eyes to Dawn as the days were nearing the date of her 21st birthday and Kiyala was internally dreading it. She couldn't imagine being the one to cause and have to listen to Dawn's final heartbeats when she'd done everything in her power to keep Dawn alive and happily healthy. This was Arliana's many annoying and yet amusing ways of getting her and Dawn to accept life as a vampire as Dawn had recently begun to enjoy what being human could offer her.

As they entered the night club, Kiyala could long before entering smell the blood so thick her fangs threatened to drop but she shook away the feeling. Dawn and at times Arliana brought out the best in the still rather young vampire. Dawn tightened her grip on Kiyala's hand to remind her that she was not alone and that Dawn was here for her as well. Kiyala smiled before finding Arliana sitting in their typical V.I.P booth waiting on them with a bottle of Grey Goose in her hand even though it did nothing for them. As they sat down Arliana had order them all a Bloodtini and a regular Martini for Dawn before they exchanged greetings among each other. Arliana asked them what they thought of the club; to which besides the bouncer they found it to be pretty impressive. Arliana thanked them before revealing that she was the proud new owner of the club.


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PostSubject: Re: Kiyala Finished   Tue Nov 18, 2014 9:02 pm

That is one insanely detailed bio. You actually changed it around too as compared to your other postings of this character. Everything else looks good. Appearance and clothing feel a little sparse for me and the organization needs to say 'Unaffiliated' but you now have...

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PostSubject: Re: Kiyala Finished   Fri Nov 21, 2014 8:43 pm

Kiyala wrote:
Have you see the OVA or read the manga series of Hellsing?  If so how far have you gotten?  If not please direct your attention to YouTube, and watch OVA 1-4 at least.  Warning: If you have watched the anime we require you watch the OVA, or read the manga.  The anime is not canon.  This is not our opinion.  This is the law set down by the creator of Hellsing, Kouta Hirano.

Name: Kiyala

Age: 120 years old

Gender: Female

Them right there's a vampire, sonny.

Vampires are a... Sucky... Race. wrote:
Physical appearance:
Kiyala is an olive skinned woman with unique tribal markings wrapping around much of her torso and limbs but not reaching her face. She is a couple of inches below average but not too much where it's really noticeable. She has a curvy yet slender frame that is slowly decreasing in frame as she further works on her agility. Her hair color is raven black and when at home for an extended amount of time she typically will wear them in thick plaits. Her eyes color being green before becoming a vampire with a noted intensity to them.

I'ma guessing you mean a couple inches shorter than average, but just a bit. Also, I think you mean decreasing in fat as she works on her agility? Are her eyes still green, or are they red like normal now?

Details make the world a safer, more defined place! c:


800x600 Resolution wrote:
Clothing of choice:
She typically prefers to wear her hair to mid-back length and whenever she can have a moment to herself; she typically expresses herself in a more girly attire but in public more appropriate wear. The inability to safely transverse in the light has greatly stifled her clothing options to night wear and clubbing attire. She has been known to wear various bracelets and earrings but not excessively as she prefers a more conventional over flashy look in public.

What kind of clubbing attire and night wear? What kind of regular clothes? Overalls and a sport coat? Spetznaz uniform? Fancy Orange Pants? Some fattening to the clothing and appearance section is in order, my friend!

Fanshay Pantz M4n wrote:
Weaponry of choice:
Twin Berrettas 92 Inox:
Their is nothing special about the guns themselves as Kiyala has never as a vampire had the connections to get any of her newer gear blessed themselves. However, the bullets are hollow tips with holy water inside while being coated in silver. The gun has the feature to be switched between multiple shots (up to three per pull) or the standard single shot. As a minor feature is should be noted how lightweight and efficient these guns are.

Tanto Swords:
Silver tanto blades with no other special features.

Ammunition counts and magazine sizes on those pistols. please. I guess you mean it has a single shot, and 2/3 shot burst modes?

Also, I find this sometimes, solid Silver swords are not really that great of an idea. Sure, they'll kill supernatural things, but they won't hold an edge whatsoever, and will break far more easily than regular swords. I suggest a steel blade, that's got silver plating, unless you like to live dangerously.



Needs moar gun because Murica wrote:
Race:
Category D Vampire

Abilities:
Regeneration may take a long amount of time for major damage (ie: 10 posts), sublime supernatural strength, agility, stamina, durability, and reflexes, big weakness to silver and blessed weaponry but survivable, kill able through conventional means, ability to turn virgins into vampires, non-virgins into somewhat weak ghouls, the need to drink blood occasionally, susceptible to unbleached damage (still fatal to them), meagre weakness to sunlight (as in they get sick around it).

Kiyala is especially talented with her tanto blades but should be also noted that this skill ranges in normal swords to staffs as well. She was trained well in me-lee weaponry but as such is weaker when it comes to shooting; which sounds laughable because she's a vampire but a part from supernatural skill a part of their ability is natural. However, she is also proficient in hand to hand fighting utilizing a mix of muay-thai with more common brawling and acrobatic techniques that simply better suit Kiyala's frame and fighting style.

Guessing Unbleached is just a typo'd Unblessed.

Good at hand-to-hand and not quite so good with pistols and other firearms. Okie Dokie. Can they cook though? Tap dance? I like tap dancing.


Rob a bank while tap dancing wrote:
Organization: Unaffiliated

Personality:
Kiyala by the people who've known her can be described as charismatic and someone who seems sure of themselves. As this is the act that she will put on in front of other people; she was never the type to simply open up to someone regardless of whether they could be considered a friend or not. If their willing to accept that then they would rather easily find themselves getting along with Kiyala. She doesn't like to speak about her past because not only does it completely kill her mood but she doesn't like sympathy from people and her story typically brings that out of normal people. She despite being rather reclusive has somewhat of a big heart towards things that appeal to it; be it a little orphan girl or people who can't fight for themselves. However, before you go painting Kiyala a hero keep in mind that these are only under best circumstances.

In a life of death situation, Kiyala's rather severe sense of self preservation kicks in. When put in a life or death situation; Kiyala will usually weigh her options and if they are not in her favor she will leave an ally, friend and even family member if they weren't particularly close. She will usually be apologetic about it but she will is not the type to risk her life needlessly. And to those who betray or seek to hurt her are the ones who truly see the true darkness that comes with being a vampire. When dealing with people she doesn't like she will at least initially attempt to be cordial but it does not take much pressure for her to unleash a cursing or violence spree. Kiyala also hold humans with little regard beyond those who happen to catch her eye; whether it's beauty, intellect, ability or an emotion. For those who Kiyala does truly care about and will sacrifice herself for; she has an extremely hard time dealing with their death or injury.

Rank: Occult Hunter/Bounty Hunter

In the wise words of Monty Python... Run Away!

Seeing humans for the most part with little worth seems pretty legit for a vampire.


The Killer Rabbit of Cannaeborg wrote:
Biography:
Kiyala was born in Compton, California on a rather sunny summer day around 2:00pm in the afternoon. Her mother was Natalia Rivercrest and her father named Thaddeus Malor. Before she Kiyala was born both her parents were hunters, while her mother only hunted vampires as part of her family heritage. Her father Thaddeus hunted all creatures whether human or non-human to a surprising degree. In truth, his reasoning for hunting supernatural was for personal reasons as his first daughter died by drained by a vengeful vampire Thaddeus could never kill named Arliana Dupree. She hailed from times before the establishment of America thus still having somewhat of a French accent that she has not been able to work herself out of. In truth, she had planned to drain Kiyala as a baby but upon trying the little girl managed to touch what was left of the vampire's revenge fueled heart. Softening it up enough for her to instead change her plans but not completely withholding the revenge Arliana believed her family deserved.

She watched Kiyala grow over the years, as she entered and exited primary school and entered secondary schooling  and started dealing with emotions, boys, girls and all other things that make a teenage girl what they are. Her mother mainly schooled her in training her as well as revealing the existence of supernaturals to her at a young age. However, she cautioned her that she was only training her so she'll be able to protect herself and not so she could follow her footsteps no matter how disgruntled that made their extended family. Her father could not teach her as he still wanted to believe she was his little girl and couldn't imagine being tough on her enough to shape her into a hunter. However, her mother knew enough to know that she would have to be pushed if she was going to live long in this life. Her mother accompanied her on her first hunt when she turned 16; which turned out to be rather uneventful as they worked through stealth and above all else overkill. While other may want to save bullets or cash saved on bullets they were taught until your clip was spent and the vampire or werewolf stopped moving that it was still alive.

I'll take this in chunks. So good so far.

But then everything changed when the Fire Nation attacked wrote:
They showered with none scent soap before hand and made sure to cover themselves in furs of a wolf. Kiyala was given the first shot and completely missed alerting the vampire. As it raced forward towards Kiyala, as it did her mother stood in front of her to ensure a shot. After ensuring her shot, she cocked back her shot gun loaded with silver bullets and holding a fine silver powder within them and fired without abandon towards the vampire. It took a few more shots but it was evident that the vampire was going to die. Kiyala's mother walked over and quickly pulled it's teeth out which served as proof when it came to receiving their payment.

Removing your scent is fine and all (Though relatively impossible even with chemicals that actually melt your flesh if used improperly) Vampires will still hear your heart beat, breathing (Werewolves even more so) So, just be careful.

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When her father was told of her lack of proficiency with a gun, it was then that he finally took it upon himself to teach her his skill in me-lee combat. However, her father held back in strength which crippled her when it came to being used to pain but he didn't hold back on execution of technique which helped her properly learn the fighting principles. Though, she'd have to learn how a true fight felt from other hunters who either wanted a friendly spar or a couple of altercations between hunters of differing belief. Her mother of course did not approve of her further joining their lifestyle but knew at this point in her training that she'd have a better chance of helping her daughter then trying to stop her. By her 21 birthday, Kiyala was a huntress of her own accomplishments. Sure she was still only taking on level F and D vampires but most young hunters never lived long enough to face a D ranked vampire. Kiyala was very practical and with her awareness of her own weakness, she tried to always live by the principle of overkill because if she didn't then her life could be forfeit.

Through-out her whole life Arliana had been watching closely but from the shadows never once revealing herself. However, she did help Kiyala quite often as their had been missions where Kiyala was walking into a trap of multiple vampires and Arliana would cull a few of them simply to watch what Kiyala could do in a fair fight and seeing how worth it the girl truly was. What struck Arliana is that Kiyala did not seem to hunt out of hate as she didn't kill vampires or supernaturals that either didn't get in her way or that weren't apart of her mission. So when Kiyala found herself and four other hunters cornered by three level C vampire who had managed to either knock away or take all the damage they could deal out was when one of her worst traits finally showed themselves. You see Kiyala and the other managed to somewhat adequately barricade the last doorway protecting them but Kiyala found a way out. However, she knew if she told the others that it would make it easier for the vampires to follow them so instead she kept her mouth closed and quietly exited the rather sizable but ran down shack they were in.

Upon exiting and making way for the woods, Kiyala tripped but over someone's foot and not the forest life beneath her feet. As she tumbled to the ground, she immediately on instinct began to roll to her feet baring the sole tanto blade she had left. Arliana stood a few feet away from Kiyala barely stifling a laugh, her normally hazel eyes turning blood shot red for a moment. She praised Kiyala for placing her own existence above the others and said that she had the makings to be stronger in another life. Kiyala wasn't stupid so she was aware of what the woman was speaking of; so instead of answering she lashed out with her tanto. Arliana almost casually knocked it out of her hand before mounting the girl knowing she was a virgin as forced the blood exchange on Kiyala. She didn't intend to kill Kiyala for revenge but to turn her into what her family hunted would be revenge enough. Plus admittedly Arliana had grown fond of the girl over the past years and didn't want to see her completely dead.

Kiyala upon waking in horror of what she was wasted no time and feeding as she didn't see the point of delaying what she felt was inevitable. Her father was more welcoming of her but still couldn't stand the thought of his daughter being a vampire while his mother seemed to completely withdraw from life and ignore her daughter's existence. She was almost lulled into the since of killing herself with her father's aide until Arliana intervened by persuading Kiyala to simply run away with her. Kiyala seeing no life with her family or without someone to learn how to live as a vampire agreed to accompany Arliana begrudgingly. But how could Kiyala really leave her life and everything she knew in her hometown? She wasn't really given a choice as hunters had been followed Arliana's trail for quite some time and they weren't aligned with the family hunting that her mother did. Kiyala knew if her family was caught 'hiding' vampires they would be forever shamed and cut off. Also the prospect of being killed in her first days of unlife was not settling well with her at all.

I'm guessing that her family only hunts for payment, and not the religion-crazed reasons that Iscariot goes for.

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The first couple of months, Kiyala bitterly followed Arliana which hindered her growth as a vampire and gotten them into trouble countless times. But the fact that Arliana never abandoned her or gave up on her began to wear on the girl's malice. And more than she would have liked at the time; did she start to see likable and even lovable traits in her sire. In truth, Kiyala was more than a little impressed with the woman's natural confidence and intellect. She taught Kiyala control in the first few years of their travels as they ended up in Washington DC. When Kiyala proved that she could properly control herself in public, she began teaching her small tricks to better fit in with the humans. This mostly consisted on being known but also not drawing at attention which meant feeding on opposite sides of town.

The hardest lesson for Kiyala to learn was the need to kill humans who might have either been too nosy or seen too much as Kiyala still held human in normal regards at this point. Arliana worked hard over the years to show Kiyala that they were a lesser species that only existed as food and to a point it worked with Kiyala. Instead, Kiyala found herself attracted to rare and beautiful things whether it was as shallow as looks or collecting 'pets' that she found to be rather useful. At first she wasn't strong enough to command respect from other vampires or werewolves so her interest were confined to talented or beautiful humans. However, this also fostered a healthy attraction to people of her same gender as she found beauty transcendent of gender now. Her first pet if she could be called that as Kiyala treats her as a child was found in her eightieth year as a vampire. A young orphan girl named Dawn who had managed to survive amongst orphan boys who at times would try to prey on the little money she had as they were still too young to be thinking of sex.

Kiyala adopted the child to the amusement of Arliana who in these days had become like an older sister to Kiyala. Kiyala had long ago seen that despite her flaws and completely messed up ways of expressing it; that the woman truly cared about Kiyala. Kiyala showered the young girl with love, affection and fine things as she grew up among the two vampires. Eventually it became time to tell her of the world that really existed around her and to her credit Dawn didn't seemed to worried about it all. In fact, she expressed interest in becoming like them so they could be together forever. At first Kiyala was completely against the idea because she did not want to corrupt Dawn as she had been corrupted herself. But then again, Kiyala never really considered herself to be an evil person merely realistic and practical. And as the years took their toll and Dawn was growing into a woman; Kiyala agreed to turn her on her 21th birthday if she still wanted to be a vampire.


Hurrah, she tuns people after being turned herself. Works for meh.



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"Kiyala it is so nice to see you! It must have been years since I've last seen you. And you brought a snack too." The bouncer said looking hungrily at Dawn who stood closely behind her 'mother'. Kiyala's rather pleasant look on her face shifted into something more quiet and yet feral about them. Her hand striking out quickly gripping around the younger vampire's neck and lifting him off his feet. She moved him just out of of kicking range, thankful for her enhanced strength as the human version of her could never sustain such a weight in one hand. She made sure she gave the man a look to further bring out the seriousness of this situation.

"This is my daughter not food. If I see you ever look at her as less than an equal I'll end you quicker than you can attempt to flee." She marginally increased the pressure of her grip for effect knowing the vampire had no need to breath. "Now out of my way!" Without so much as a look she'd callously toss the bouncer out of her way as she took hold of Dawn's hand and lead her inside the underground night club. Some of the best vampire nightclubs were in the most remote of towns as governments typically did not care about backwater towns but since they left America for Europe; it had taken them quite some time to establish themselves enough to garner enough respect to survive on their own.

In truth, it was more so due to the eldest of them and her sire Arliana but Kiyala would like to think that she was growing into a rather strong vampire as well. Such thoughts drew her eyes to Dawn as the days were nearing the date of her 21st birthday and Kiyala was internally dreading it. She couldn't imagine being the one to cause and have to listen to Dawn's final heartbeats when she'd done everything in her power to keep Dawn alive and happily healthy. This was Arliana's many annoying and yet amusing ways of getting her and Dawn to accept life as a vampire as Dawn had recently begun to enjoy what being human could offer her.

As they entered the night club, Kiyala could long before entering smell the blood so thick her fangs threatened to drop but she shook away the feeling. Dawn and at times Arliana brought out the best in the still rather young vampire. Dawn tightened her grip on Kiyala's hand to remind her that she was not alone and that Dawn was here for her as well. Kiyala smiled before finding Arliana sitting in their typical V.I.P booth waiting on them with a bottle of Grey Goose in her hand even though it did nothing for them. As they sat down Arliana had order them all a Bloodtini and a regular Martini for Dawn before they exchanged greetings among each other. Arliana asked them what they thought of the club; to which besides the bouncer they found it to be pretty impressive. Arliana thanked them before revealing that she was the proud new owner of the club.

Lel, Bloodtinis.

Just fix the stuff in the appearance and the clothing, and I'll give ya an approval!
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PostSubject: Re: Kiyala Finished   Sat Nov 22, 2014 1:54 am

Sorry I haven't gotten to this sooner. College has been water boarding me with liquid stress. Now then... Everything looks good for the most part. There might be some room for improvement but me being a horrible dyslexic and having a even worse way with words, I don't think they'll be too severe for a issue. Overall I think everything looks well fabricated.

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PostSubject: Re: Kiyala Finished   Sat Nov 22, 2014 1:58 pm

You're approved kiyala. Go and have fun!
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