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PostSubject: The Snow Girl   Wed Aug 01, 2012 4:31 pm

One day, theres a girl name Yuki Onna. Before she starts moving in to Hellsing Organization, Intergal send a message to her to join the organization, then she says she agrees to be part of the Organization. Hours later in her new room, she starts upacking her stuff. But theres something that she never felt before. She sensed that someone is watching her, and she can feel her hair on her neck is standing up and can feel someone standing next to her. She turns around and saw a tall man wearing Victoria red trenchcoat, has jetted black hair, has very pale skin, and he has red crimson eyes, when he smiles , he has a huge fang. And she realized that he is a vampire. Yuki Onna is shocked, speechless, shakened, and can't from his eyes. What should I do ? Should I run or face him ?
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PostSubject: Re: The Snow Girl   Wed Aug 01, 2012 4:38 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The Snow Girl   Wed Aug 01, 2012 8:26 pm

I really don't know what to say to this. It took three times of us telling you for you to even read the rules, and now you can't even find the application to post your character (on the very same page you posted this) after another member walked you through the process.
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PostSubject: Re: The Snow Girl   Wed Aug 01, 2012 9:39 pm

Name : Yuki Onna

Race : Snow woman or people

Age : 14

Special Abilities : Ice

Weapon : a snow sword

Eyes : Dark red

Personality : She can be cruel harded but she very sweet and generious, but sometimes when someone angers her she'll quickly turn them to ice with her breathe when she blows or used icy stares at them. She is shy when it comes to boys that she likes, but during the battle, she cold hearted and very challenged. She ignores that someone that annoys her. Shes very smart on Math and Chemistry. She very stratagitic when it comes to fighting the enemy. Her code name is : Snow Angel. She a very beautiful young girl. She have opposite personality whiches postive and negaive. Her eyes can turn in red to blue depend on her mood.

Appearance : She wears a scarf and school uniform and sometimes wear clothes thats color white. Her skin is snowy white come pairs to the snow, that way she can easy camoflauge with snowy surroundings. She often have a lollipop-like ice in her mouth to keep her cool. And she usually wear stripe-high knee socks.

History : Since she was born, she have a potential of fighting skills and knowledge. And have special power which she got from her mother. When she was 7, she doesn't have friends at school. She has been harassed and bullied. But her mother is on her side and never leave her and loves her. After her mother died from illness, she attending to go to academy and lives in the apartment by her self. She still working on her battle skill physically, she got it from her father which she doesn't know him. But her father is unknown and she never saw him even when she was born.

Likes : cakes, dresses, school uniform, scarf, winter, shave ice, ice cream, and guys and vampire (good guys)

Dislikes : evil vampires,Nazis,spicy food, and hot food.

Favorite times : Night

Mother : Shirayuri (Yuki Onna I)-Deased

Father : Unknown.


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PostSubject: Re: The Snow Girl   Wed Aug 01, 2012 9:50 pm

No just no, we have a template all set up and you didn't even bother to check the race information.
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PostSubject: Re: The Snow Girl   Wed Aug 01, 2012 10:04 pm

Echoing Jay, but I'm going to go into more detail here. This character is unacceptable in every sense of the word. You fail to use the template we provide (again, IN THE SAME PLACE WHERE YOU MADE THIS POST, RIGHT UP AT THE TOP) despite another member walking you through the process. The character itself is a GIGANTIC Mary Sue and does not fit with the Hellsing universe in the slightest. Your history makes no sense, your ability is random and can generally be considered magic, and I'm honestly considering banning you on the grounds of you being a troll.

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PostSubject: Re: The Snow Girl   Thu Aug 02, 2012 5:03 pm

Now I see the horror people were mentioning. You've been told more than enough times by these more than qualified staff members. You've failed to listen, and now you deal with me. You are just lucky I happen to be on vacation and don't have a laptop and just a smartphone. So I can't exactly drill into you like I should so you could understand. So I'll vote.

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