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PostSubject: newly edited rough character sheet   Sun Apr 15, 2012 8:30 pm

ok, so this is my new character sheet, all fixed up (at least that I know). if i still need to fix something, let me know.


Name (commonly used codename): Crazy

Aliases: Little Lemur; Wildman; Ghost; Weird Al; Alien; Italiano (he is Italian-American); Little One


Age: 17


Gender: Male


Physical Appearance: Crazy is about 5’ 8” in height. He has a skinny build; his body isn’t very bulky at all. He is a little bit muscular, however, call it “skinny-buff”. He has a whitish-yellow skin tone. His feet are kind of big, so his shoes stick right out from his bootcut jeans. He has bony hands & fingers. He is Italian-American, with facial features packed tightly & low on his face, so it looks as if he has a big forehead. He has deep blue eyes which aren’t very wide open. His hair is brunette with a lot of soft spikes in it. His ears tend to stick out a lot compared to normal from a lack cartilage in them.


Clothing of Choice: Crazy wears bootcut jeans all the time, never slim jeans. He believes that slim jeans look stylish on some guys; he’s just not one of those guys. He wears a black jacket, long like a trenchcoat, with a white tee-shirt underneath. He wears arm-covers for protection, in which these also hold his six kunai. Covering his eyes are large, silver sunglasses like the ones that sheriffs wear. He loves hats other than baseball caps because they’re so common. So he likes hats like fedoras, hunting caps, & many other quirky kinds of hats. He wears a black fedora with a white ribbon & a light blue feather. He wears basketball-type sneakers, in which have a triangular shape when seen from the side, with sole that covers a bit of the heel & the toe that protrudes from underneath his pant legs. Crazy has a big, blue scarf surrounding his neck. He carries a satchel that hides his G36C.


Weaponry of Choice: Crazy has an arsenal that consists of an M1911, 2 M95K’s, a G36C, a katana, & a set of 6 kunai.

The M1911 is an American handgun that uses .45 ACP’s. Crazy supplies it with silver plated bullets, specially for vampires. He keeps it in a holster on the back of his belt, pretty much hidden by his own body and his coat. He will use it like anyone would use a handgun: careful shooting or a quick switch to something when a mag runs out on a different weapon while in a situation that runs on split seconds. Using the silver plated bullets, his tactic against vampires is to wound them with a different, more powerful weapon to render them vulnerable, then deal a blow with this weapon deadly as long as the vampire targeted isn’t a very high-category one. He supplies just this weapon with silver bullets, because they are expensive and fully-automatic weapons will quickly leak them away.

The MP5 family is a family of modern, German submachine guns, which use the classic 9X19 mm Parabellum handgun round. The MP5K is a stockless variant of the MP5. He keeps these in large pockets in his jacket. He may use both of his MP5K’s at once to engage on multiple targets at once. Sometimes he will use only one when navigating tight environments like inside buildings & hallways. He will pull one out if an opponent appears on the scene & engages suddenly, because it can be an emergency measure when things happen in a second.

The G36C is a German assault rifle with a folding skeletal buttstock, using a 5.56X45 mm NATO cartridge. It can be a decent CQB weapon due to its size, or a PDW compared to other assault rifles, because you can store it easier than others with its folding stock. He keeps this weapon in his satchel with the buttstock folded. He uses this for accuracy-based shooting. Sometimes he will attempt penetration shots, in which he will sometimes shoot his opponent through the same object they are hiding behind if possible, for example an overturned table.

Katana are old Japanese swords. These are long with a single edge, they may weigh around the same as a traditional sword and lighter than 3-dementional ones. Crazy was able to make his own so he can fight opponents who fight at close range or with a sword. He stores it in a scabbard on the side of his belt, being one of the only weapons you see before he draws it. He had his blessed so that it may more damage to vampires than the conventional cut would do to them, depending on the type of vampire he is pitted up against.

Kunai are Japanese throwing knives, preferred by ninjas. Crazy puts these in his arm covers, ready to be pulled out easily at any given point in time, in which you could barely see them by the ring pommels. He will use his set of six that he made in the same way: he will throw these at his opponents in quick ordeals. He also tends to use these for self-defense, as in if someone grabs him with the intentions to harm him or sneak-attacks him and he finds out, he will resort to these kunai. They have also been blessed so they too will pack a punch on weak vampires.


Race: Human


Abilities: Crazy doesn’t have any direct superpowers, as he is a human. He does have a sensory mechanism that means that he senses threats especially from the paranormal. He fights with martial arts types of fighting, and that includes the ability to turn his opponent’s force against them. He isn’t very physically strong, but he is agile. He will vault over objects often and jump over things on his way to a destination, like a simple parkourist. He has a big imagination and can make some impressive art for his age.


Organization: Hellsing Organization


Personality: Crazy is a big softy when it comes to being social, pretty gentle, so he hates to hear that he hurt someone’s feelings. He is agitated by the smell of failure, and can become temperamental or get frustrated when he starts messing up. He can be shy around women his age, especially those he finds attractive. He loves to meet new people, so he is thrilled to visit new places. He likes to crack jokes every once in a while and play with his own words, or making new figurative language. He isn’t fond of loud sounds very much, however, but he has gotten used to the sounds of guns, having being around them all the time. He is a bit of a wandering soul.

Crazy is really into art and music, as in that he likes seeing intricate designs on things and crazy sculptures, as well as being open to trying a new artist in music because he likes all kinds of music, as long as he doesn’t hear any one artist or song to much. He likes to draw his own art & superheroes and listen to music on spare time, occasionally going to a firing range at the Hellsing Organization to test a new weapon or hone his skills on his own weapons.


He is rather open-minded to new topics & material, looking to hear people’s thoughts & ideas. This includes the fact that when in conflicts, Crazy is able to understand multiple points of view while maintaining his own beliefs or preferences and come up with a compromise. He is the trustworthy type; he never lies to his clients. When there is a task he needs to do, like paperwork, he really wants to get it done & as soon as possible.

You can call him a firearms enthusiast or specialist; he isn’t good at using every kind of firearm, but knows a good deal about them and may know his way around a gun he hasn’t actually seen in person. He can be sympathetic even in battle, in which he goes by “kill-or-maim”.


Rank: Trainee


Biography: Crazy was born as & still is a human. He was born with what is legally considered a disorder. Normally this disorder hinders one’s social prose, but subjects also make up for this in physical or mental ability.

Because of this, Crazy has been ridiculed & persecuted for his “disability” only because he has it, looked down on by the misinformed & prejudging. He began to get depressed, but always at least slightly trusted his faith in God that he is something and that God has a plan for him. He also trusted that he was a good artist and that this was what he WAS complimented on.

He grew tired finding out about lives being taken by the paranormal type of threat, as well as those who still being tortured by the menace. Once, even he was threatened. His family was killed when he was sixteen, and he was next. It was the will to fight & his possession of art supplies that saved his life, including a pencil & paints, so that should be a hint.

Now he has the spirit & the will to fight for his life, freedom, friends that he DOES have, & what he believes in. That was when he bought an M1911 and made himself a katana & six kunai, which he had blessed.

He found out about the Hellsing Organization and knew this was his chance. He had the diamond hard determination to please them, with a go-big attitude, while keeping his “difference” (he eventually learned not to see it as a disability, but even an advantage) a secret. Once he was accepted, he was assigned to “Taskforce Black Jacket”, so they keep an eye out for him, where he looks up to Operative Johnson as a big brother figure to fill the void.

Now, he is a nice guy who is also a light joker so that his secret hard attitude doesn’t come out wrong and hurt someone’s feelings. As said, he still has the tough, no-excuses motive to get a job done, as well as to make sure it is done right. He gets very angry if someone or something threatens the ones he “loves”, as he cares dearly for others, he believes the reason is so that they don’t suffer the same way he did.


RP Sample: It was just another day at the firing range for Operative Crazy. He was honing his skill on & testing a Beretta M9. Operative Johnson walks through the squeaky door, made squeaky so those shooting know they’re not being snuck up on. Johnson pauses for a minute, knowing his friend, Crazy, that guy has probably been at the firing line for a while. Turns out ...PAH……PAH…, Crazy is blowing off brass through a peashooter. Crazy stops shooting for a moment, flips the safety on and turns around. “Safe! Oh, hey Johnson!” “Hey Crazy! I was lookin’ for ya. I wanted to check up on you, cuz you seem to be a pretty curious little guy. I knew I would find you at a local firing range, somehow.” Crazy explains, “Oh did you? Well, one of the operatives picked off one of these Beretta (rattling his tongue at the ‘r’, he says ‘that’s how you’re supposed to say it’) M9’s and wanted to check with me to see if it was safe. Course, you would think it was if someone was using it, then again, you can never be too careful.”

“You seem to know a lot about this stuff. I mean, for somebody to come to you first when they just got a new weapon & it wasn’t at a gun store.” Crazy says, “Yeeaah, I feel like I know a little too much for a guy like me, don’tcha think?” Johnson responds, “Oh no, not at all, well…” Crazy replies, almost laughing, “That’s ‘cuz it benefits somebody else! Well, in that case, it makes me a little bit alright with it. I mean, if some ability of yours helps somebody, might as well use it.” as he’s flipping the safety off. (to himself) “Finish this grouping… (to Johnson) Going hot.” He then fires three more rounds PAH…PAH…PAH! The weapon’s slide then flies back as the last shot is fired. He whispers to himself, “Well that seems to be in order!” then switches the empty magazine for a full one and clicks the slide forward again. He says to Johnson, “Why not talk while I check the target?” Johnson tells Crazy, “So I was thinking you might wanna leave your headpiece on or program my number into your cell phone. I mean, what if we needed you at moment’s notice or something, and we didn’t have any idea where you were or couldn’t get a hold of you?” Crazy says to him as he gets to his perforated target, “Yeah, I see what you’re sayin’. (to himself) Dang, not that good a grouping! (to Johnson) Yeah, I don’t wanna disappoint anybody here! Just because of my own curiosities & wanderings, I don’t need anybody else to pay a price for- LOOK OUT!!!” Crazy was turning back to Johnson and realizes there is a large weapon sitting straight up-&-down on top of the long desk at the firing line. They have an attacker.


Crazy leans quickly to his right while going for the ground and pushes Johnson down. The attacker emits a large “POOOM” from a sniper rifle and barely misses as that bullet punches a big hole into the wall. Crazy quickly pushes himself back up and fires two suppressive rounds at the perpetrator, one appearing to have struck the weapon. “C’mon, Johnson! (reaching for his hand) Let’s say you & I take this s_head down!” “Right!” They both run towards there hidden opponent. “Spread out!” shouts Crazy to Johnson. They approach the attacker at only twenty more feet away. He then rises up from his hiding place and chucks two throwing knives, one for each would-be target. Luckly they both dodge the oncoming blades and attempt to fire back at the attacker with their handguns, but he has already hidden himself once again. They slowly walk up to the desk and Crazy signs off to Johnson, telling him to stay there and that they will grab him when he rises back up from the desk. They do just that. Their attack rises back up with a handgun held in a firing position straight out in front of him to the far left, expecting them to have walked around the desk to catch him. They were smart enough to take caution of that, and so Crazy grabs his opponents firing hand and pulls it toward himself. While shifting underneath his opponents arm, Crazy hooks him in the face & flips the safety on with the same hand he used to grab the attacker’s armed hand. “Johnson, hop the desk & grab him!” he tells Johnson as he hammers the attacker’s wrist with his armed hand and pulls the gun out, throwing down range. The attacker his finally able to grab Crazy by his jacket and pulls him in on an attempt to butt his head at Crazy’s. Crazy reacts by putting his head down so that his opponent hammers the top of it with his forehead, where a fedora is sitting. “Ow! Jeez, you’re an aggressive one!” Crazy shouted as he was rubbing his head. He then jabs his opponent’s gut and spin-kicks his face, with his leg flying over the desk. Johnson tries to grab, but gets elbowed in the face in the process. So Crazy grabs the perp by the collar and slaps him, then pulls his face to the desk. Johnson finally is able to grab the perp’s hands and cuff him. “Hellsing Organization, you’re under arrest.” Johnson forces. They hand-shake and take the wannabe assailant into custody. Crazy says to himself “Well that proves this things reliability in battle! Man, my hat!”
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PostSubject: Re: newly edited rough character sheet   Tue Apr 17, 2012 1:40 pm

Alright. Well there's a couple of things that are weird about this character to me and yet oddly entertaining. You don't really explain how he came by some of these nicknames and have way too many of them for a character who is as young as he is and a lot of them don't really seem to fit with the character at all. For the Italian-American thing, I'm sorry but I have to chuckle at the irony a little bit. When I started on this forum a year ago, I had an Italian vampire piano player named Artisto Perfetto or "Perfect Artist". I doubt that would be where your inspiration came from but if so, you need something far more artsy. The whole Crazy Artiste thing seems to be more of a side note than part of the actual character.

Anyway...Next item. You have way too many weapons for being such a young character again without to much explanation as to how he became trained in them. You got German submachine guns, a Japanese katana and kunai and an American handgun. While I do love the fact that you are a weapon neopolitan, it's a little off putting.

The personality's alright. Seems like an okay character.

I don't much like the way he handles thing in RP however, you use complete sentences and have decent grammar so I suppose it is a mood point.

The main things I am asking you to change are the names and remove some of the weapons or flesh out exactly why he needs so many. Do that and you have my approval.
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PostSubject: Re: newly edited rough character sheet   Tue Apr 17, 2012 8:35 pm

nah its not a rip. glad you chuckled! (3 so do you think I could explain what all these nicknames are for, as in why he uses a bunch of different ones?
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PostSubject: Re: newly edited rough character sheet   Tue Apr 17, 2012 8:47 pm

Probably not all of them. He isn't short, the Italian american thing would make sense if you explained some of that in the bio, and the rest of it, i would just get rid of. Either that or think of something new altogether. I might suggest something like Crazy 8 if you wanted to be a smart ass. He's 5'8" so it makes sense. I'd say also give him a real name to follow. Especially if hes that young, a miliary organization is likely to call him by his name anyway. On top of that, all of the silver weaponry is a little weird for this guy too now that i think about it again having to do with his age.
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PostSubject: Re: newly edited rough character sheet   Wed Apr 18, 2012 12:05 am

not to correct or disrespect, dont worry its just the handgun that involves silver. submachinegun uses typical copperplated lead, sword & kunai are made of the typical steel, just blessed 3)
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