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PostSubject: Hakop"the Forsaken Tiger" Hasashyan   Thu Mar 08, 2012 7:16 pm

Have you see the OVA or read the manga series of Hellsing? If so how far have you gotten? If not please direct your attention to YouTube, and watch OVA 1-4 at least. Warning: If you have watched the anime we require you watch the OVA, or read the manga. The anime is not canon. This is not our opinion. This is the law set down by the creator of Hellsing, Kouta Hirano.
I've watched the anime for a bit, and am currently reading the manga, I've gotten to chapter 18, right when Alucard exit's the hotel in rio and war has been declared.


Name: Hakop "The Forsaken Tiger" Torayan

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Physical appearance:
Hakop towers over most people, he stands at 6 feet 2 inches and has long slicked back black hair. Hakop is a well build man; he is large, and highly muscular. His muscles are dense and allow for him to only show his muscles when he flexes. He is the type of person who wears clothing that is too big for him, but then again, this is all to hold his weaponry. Hakop is a Vampire hunter, not the ordinary hunter, but a priest. Anyway, Hakop's clothing consist of an Armenian priest's uniform: a black hooded robe with a gold and red tarp laying over his shoulders in a half circle on both sides, over that he wears a black coat. This coat is to hide his clothing. How ever, he does wear a visible cross, a silver cross necklace held together with a chain. Hakop wears black dress pants and italian shoes. The shoes also have a cross on the design, The shoes are black with silver and white stitching and cross. Under all this clothes, his body is covered in wrappings, and on top of the wrapping he wears holsters for his blades, guns, and other weapons. Granted he doesn't have an entire arsenal of weapons, but what ever he has he uses to its fullest. First, he has two katana on his back forming an X, And on his front he has 30 small bottles of Holy water tied in an X design, hoisted up with the same holster for the katana. At his sides he carries two FN-5ive 7evens. The guns are hoisted up with a special belt that also held ten extra clips in the front and back, for a total of twenty. These clips were no regular clips, they where made of silver, blessed, and carried blessed silver hollow points. Hakop also wears cross bracelets and carries a large cross around his chest, this large cross is also the hilt to a blade that is hidden within the cross. His shoes also hold retractable blades.

Weaponry of choice:

Katana (2)
These katana are made of a metal that is infused with silver, and been blessed through its crafting, allowing for the power of god to flow through the weapons. This is used mainly against everything except vampires. He prefers his guns for that.

FN 5ive 7even (2)
These guns shoot silver hollow points that have been blessed, as well as carry a load of power, being able to fire riffle like bullets.

Shoe blades (2)
Regular blades hidden in the soles of the shoes, activated when the big toe hits the base of the shoe with a bit of pressure. These blades are used for elaborate kicking techniques, plus simple kicks turn into stabs.

Gauntlets (2) These, more or less are regular gauntlets, the only thing that makes these gauntlets any more dangerous is that they're made out of 1/4 inch high dense titanium that has been made with fragmented church crosses; silver crosses. To make matters worse, this was only the base, and it had been. There was also an outer layer of silver coating, again made with a melted silver cross. The physical appearance of these gauntlets also had retractable claws. Within the base steel metal of the gauntlets is a cooling system. The system is similar to the circulatory system in which that it has vessels, and carries holy water through the gauntlet, the water is still, and doesn't move unless the reservoirs at the rim of the gauntlet begin pumping water to and from. It pumped with a bit of help from gravity, when the water moved, it pushed up against a windmill like device that forced water out of the pump. Within the motor is a small generator that would begin creating energy as it was pushed, and then that energy would continue pumping. The generator creates more energy than used, and charges it into the holy water, which then charges the titanium/silver metal. The metal is protected with anti-rust coatings, and Hakop is protected with a rubber insole that stops electricity from penetrating. The vessels in the light weight titanium gloves make them much, much easier to carry.

Race:
Human

Abilities:
Hakop, being a priest, is able to Bless items.
Strength/Speed: Being built of Lean, dense muscle he is capable of near super human strength and speed, Being in touch with god, and working for him would not hurt his abilities.
Quick learner - He can assess a situation and find the best way out of situation; this ability doesn't go beyond that

Organization: Iscariot

Personality:
Hakop is the first to kill. He is a sociopath and it does not bother him what he kills. He is rather calm, but can snap easily when he smells vampire blood, his occupation and past have both contributed to his sociopath ways. When he does snap he loses all control over his mental state and physical power, making him much more dangerous since now he is unrestricted from himself.

Rank: Priest

Biography:


RP sample:

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PostSubject: Re: Hakop"the Forsaken Tiger" Hasashyan   Sun Mar 11, 2012 12:53 am

The rp sample confused me, you just started with action and didn't explain where you were and your char lost his left arm and was fine ? I think the blood lose would get to him rather quickly. And there is meant to be a social part as well.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakop"the Forsaken Tiger" Hasashyan   Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:45 pm

There's some things on here that I just don't get.

1. The gauntlets. The idea seems interesting, and maybe possible. However, as you are a human I just do not see how you would even be able to wear them let alone lift them. There seems to be a lot in them, and to them just to get them working. They just seem complicated.

2. Every priest can bless things. It's common.

3. You're starting to sound like a gary stu here. Being born on Mount Ararat, taking an oath at age 7 (which is technically not allowed, and you can only be sworn in by someone higher up than your father.), and then being a boxing champion of Armenia.

4. RP sample wise again a slight flaw. If a vampire entered the Vatican he would have Iscariots on his back within a second. I know cause I've had Hellsing members including Alucard enter the Vatican, and the Iscariots were on us like flys on rotten meat.

Just change what I listed, and fix the gauntlets somehow.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakop"the Forsaken Tiger" Hasashyan   Tue Mar 13, 2012 9:43 pm

Need more detail on all the weapons but gauntlets.

I agree with Integra; despite the gloves being mostly titanium, you've still got a shit ton of weight from the claws and the large amounts of silver. Also, holy water isn't as effective as you seem to think it it. It hurts, yes, but they can muscle through it.

Need a lot of detail on this "quick learner" thing. I do not want someone who can go, "An extremely high tech piece of machinery that takes people decades to fully understand? Let me have a look at- here we go!"

Doesn't have much personality. Is the only thing he ever thinks about really, "Kill! Kill! Kill!"?

Wait just a minute; he killed a vampire at 10? And...what happened next? You just brush by that and don't even give an explanation as to why a kid like him would be able to do that. Yes, he knows how to box a little, but that's like saying you can stop a train with a combat knife.

Holy water will not kill a vampire instantly. I cannot repeat this enough. Also, vampire blood kind of just smells like blood.

Wouldn't working at a church to help others kind of help him not go crazy? I also don't think Iscariot, even being the murderous holy heathens they are, would be too happy about you randomly killing people for no reason; maybe if they were heathens, but that would cause a pretty big fuss if a Catholic priest just randomly killed people all the time.

Your bio says you were excommunicated, yet you still list yourself as part of Iscariot. Also, you wouldn't be able to use any of your holy stuff if you were excommunicated; the Iscariot priests crazy "magic" stuff comes from God, and if the Pope says no more God for you, no more power to bless or do stuff.

You have no social post. There is no conversation in any of that.


I have to agree, you're showing a lot of Sue tenancies. Also, you seem to act like madness is something that makes you extremely awesome; that is not the case. If this guy was really crazy enough to the point he goes around killing random people for no reason at all, he'd be in an asylum by now. This doubles after he was kicked out of Catholicism, as Iscariot wouldn't be there to have his back any longer. This may be salvageable, but I have my doubts, honestly.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakop"the Forsaken Tiger" Hasashyan   Wed Mar 14, 2012 3:46 pm

Please let us know when this is ready for votes again.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakop"the Forsaken Tiger" Hasashyan   Thu Mar 29, 2012 6:09 pm

Still working on this?
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PostSubject: Re: Hakop"the Forsaken Tiger" Hasashyan   Mon Apr 23, 2012 3:26 pm

Are you still working on this?
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PostSubject: Re: Hakop"the Forsaken Tiger" Hasashyan   Thu Apr 26, 2012 2:27 pm

I do like the idea of the gauntlets, but what I suggest for this to work better is to take away some of the elements; make them a little lighter or extend them so they make sort of a vest; chest armor if you will. It might even things out for this OC and you can take a few more hits.

From what I understand, you are basing this OC around pure muscle and speed. Close range. Of that would be a boxer or MMA fighter. I think this can work, but you need to brainstorm a little more on it and perhaps make these gauntlets and a sword, or, gun your primary weapons. Remember you can upgrade anything within reason as you go along.

Second, because I am extremely picky about it, is personality. Develop it. There needs to be a bit more than what you have... quite a bit more and pray to God it does not get too far out there.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakop"the Forsaken Tiger" Hasashyan   Fri May 11, 2012 7:59 pm

Once again, stepping in to assist the Staff in the registry on behalf of Sirina/Enrico. You have 24 hours to respond to Staff inquiries before I disapprove the sheet.
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