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PostSubject: Sergiy   Sat Nov 05, 2011 2:58 pm

Have you see the OVA or read the manga series of Hellsing? If so how far have you gotten? If not please direct your attention to youtube, and watch OVA 1-4 at least. Warning: If you have watched the anime we require you watch the OVA, or read the manga. The anime is not canon. This is not our opinion. This is the law set down by the creator of Hellsing, Kouta Hirano.

I am watching it, on my second esp, after that I'm gonna read the manga. And I am enjoying it.

Name: (Sergiy Alias: Death)

Age: (21)

Gender: (Male)

Physical appearance: ( He stands 7' holds a over growth gene that has now stopped he weights in 300 pounds of muscle. He has nor black eyes. People long hair, that go down towards his lower back. Well toned. He is black in color. He has dragon tattoo on his back, and death skull on his face, and front body.)

Clothing of choice: (His clothing style is rather a mess, he wears noble pants, boxers, shoes, boots sometimes, shirts, jacket, suits, gloves, ripped gloves, and a long long robe that's hooded. He normalily wears black clothing which is pants, boots, socks, boxers, belt, ripped gloves, shirt, robe that's hood, and his scythe.)

Weaponry of choice: (He possessions normal weaponry, Guns, Automatics, shotguns, sniper riles, silver blade, silver daggers, all normal modern day weaponry, However he does not carry all of them at once that's to much and his body wouldn't be able to carry that many weapons, so they lay in his home. And he picks which ever he needs, He has herbs, and a lot of ammo for each of his guns. he always Carries his long 6 feet long and 24 inches wide Scythe with him, which holds no special property aside that's it's sliver. The whole blade of the 24 inch tip blade is silver he has to be careful when wielding, He normally carries, of already made Hand gun with normal metal bullets, and already made silver ammo that was made by a human well his service man for him, seeing as silver is harmful to him. It's already made for him, with the automatic lightmachine gun, and lastly his silver daggers, on his lower back tighly shut closed so they won't slip.)

Race: (Werewolf/ Current Status of Cub)

Abilities: (Abilities of a Werewolf Cub.Great weakness to blessed and silver weaponry (often fatal), regeneration (takes up to 25 posts max to regenerate major wound damage such as limb loss), meager super strength, agility, stamina, reflexes, durability and senses, inability to either transform into a human or werewolf (depending on how they were at first) though only with the aid of the full moon.)

Organization: (Hellsing)

Personality: (He has ADHD, and bipolar disorder, however he has an IQ OF 300. Although he does not use it all. He is more over dramatic, into over use of his weapons then using his talented brain for problem solving and getting his way out without fighting. Which comes at the aid of his ADHD, and Bipolar disorder, he can be outrageously loud, or nice or happy at the same time, maybe angry switching different personality at once. He is mostly calm and easy going with all folks, he enjoys killing criminals and monsters. By monsters he means good people, he is unstable weapon, of configure personality. Other then that, he is fun to social when of duty and enjoys manner foreplay, and picking women, and then killing them for fun. As for friends, he greatly needs them and tried to treat them as best as he can to keep there trust.)

Rank: (Hoping for Corporal, if not then Private First Class)

Biography: (Born in a harsh Family of werewolves, He was raised harshly, and usually beaten when doing something wrong though his life he he didn't enjoying working, but was forced to do so. Sergiy came from Russian now lives in the Britain. In Russia he had monetized all the Russian letters, spoke Russian, and Ukrainian, as well as wrote both in Russian and in Ukrainian perfectly. He knew his times tables, multimillion, substantiation, division, and addition at age 4. He had skipped Pre School and K. And went to first grade at age 5. His marks were rather outstanding as by all Russians. Were. He ligatured at 12 grade, knowing five different languorous not all fluent he actually knew 7 two of them being Russian and Ukrainian which he can speak fluently, and English. English however was his troubled mistake, he had grammar and spelling problems, but he spoke it fluent with minor little to no accent when he moved To Britain.

At age 18 he moved to Britain being heavily Intelligence. It was at this point of his life where he had joined Hellsing organization, and where he found his new found talent and to harness his skills. He learned the basics, of aircraft, flying, driving, fire arms, martial arts, Close Combat fighting, And was a great adept due to the fact that he was a werewolf, yet he chose not to tell them, scared of what they might do to him. He kept it to himself treeing to always mask it and not use his abilities, although his strength, came from it he did not have to mask that, due to his outrageous size which stopped growing at 21, he learned the basics of Tracking and basic medical training. He has his own house, which is heavily equipped with his weapons.)

RP sample: ([It has nearly been six months, six long hard working months, Full of freaking Bull crap and insanity in this idiotic stupid unionization.I have meant my few of foes, that I one day will destroy and exterminate into the pits of Oblivion.My former Colleges, Had been already promoted Genin, Yet I waited, it was only a matter of time until I became one as well.You see it is not that friendship, or love, Nor Urgency of happiness that makes one truly happy in the world it is how you define yourself.I myself Plan, Once I am a Jounin or Kage, to take over the world and to infect Dictatorship around my people and country, cause war win, infect bargains, Enslavement. It has always been my dream to do this. Always has been, The day I was born but I must wait it will come soon enough or I will be simply changed into a Happy Loving person, I am nine of age still and a Progeny as well as a Genin.I have been pushed and tossed like a bloody sea hawk, I was punched in the face by the teacher, Slammed into the wall, and Down on the ground, I have Indore radically punishment for my body at a young age, that most children will surely Cry From. It is my time current time to learn and Kill, To Assassination anyone I feel like, but the time is not yet ready my darling, I will Find this Creepy looking Teacher Ken, I will confront him.

It is the time of Clumping As I have Developed and Created a Poison that took me a few weeks to form. It was rarely Hard, but I manged it. It was rare to do soon. Unlike others I have a High Level IQ for my Age and Is able to Develop and act quickly, In high presser secretion.Now as I was saying, Upon getting the rank of Genin with the promotion I was given I was able to have my former Blade, re crafted and made longer, yet it's more heavily then it should be of course. But it will help me with my upper body strength and place me into a radically slow motion.In Walking and running.

Lastly I will be ending this section of show and tell by saying I have deposited a Gasp for the Poison like Elements The Dokuton element it is a rare element and only few use it.And few master it. It's quine and great for Basic users, But powerful to Nature and the envelopment as well to the user, once he or she has advance the level of Mastery over the element. And Now we must part, Fellow readers, Until next time when I have achieved the rank of Chuunin. May the Vampires eat your soul)


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PostSubject: Re: Sergiy   Sat Nov 05, 2011 4:29 pm

First, answer the first question. It's not just there to look pretty.

The height and weight there are going to be ridiculously impractical for you in combat situations. That's not a request for change, just a warning.

You need more detail on the clothing. It's great that he has more than one outfit, but I can't visualize any of his clothing just based off a single article.

First, even if you don't have them all at once, that is a lot of weapons. Second, if you're a werewolf, you flat out cannot use silver; a single silver filling was able to kill Hans in the manga, so even just touching your own bullets might take you down. Once again, need more detail, as well as an explanation on what you mean by "herbs".

First of all, a 300 IQ is not only extremely implausible on its own, but nearly impossible for someone with both ADHD and bipolar disorder. I also don't think Integra would approve of someone who goes around killing people for fun and flying off the handle randomly and attacking innocents; Neko Jay (our token split personality/cat boy) has some degree of control over his outbursts, which is why Integra allows him to stay in the organization. Your guy doesn't sound like he has any control at all over his blood lust, and would therefore be hunted down and killed.

Rank is up to Integra to approve, I guess.

To start off, no one is born a werewolf or vampire or such, so that part of your history has to be rewritten. Next, we have no clue as to how he got into Hellsing. Expand on that; did he just walk up to the front gate and ask for a job? I doubt you'd need to hide being a werewolf from the rest of Hellsing, as well as the fact the majority of the staff there would be able to tell (if no one else, Alucard would call you out on it). Also, Hellsing operatives live in the mansion.

RP sample needs to be rewritten in third person, as that is how you'll be posting. Not only that, this isn't your character; it's a Naruto one. The RP sample is meant to tell us how you'll use this character, meaning it has to be that character for us to tell.

Fix this stuff and I think you'll be good.
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PostSubject: Re: Sergiy   Sun Nov 06, 2011 8:12 am

Will do I have fixed some minor errors, on weapon I nerfed the Size to 7 feet, and weight to 300 pounds. I am still working on the rest, so please give me time.
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PostSubject: Re: Sergiy   Sun Nov 06, 2011 9:28 am

Take your time. Looking better.
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PostSubject: Re: Sergiy   Tue Nov 15, 2011 2:45 pm

Still working on this?
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PostSubject: Re: Sergiy   Sun Nov 27, 2011 1:21 pm

You've got until the 6th before I disapprove this for inactivity.
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PostSubject: Re: Sergiy   Tue Dec 06, 2011 6:18 pm

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