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PostSubject: Herr Major; Ready to vote!   Fri Sep 09, 2011 9:41 pm

Have you see the OVA or read the manga series of Hellsing? 1-4

Name: Herr Major; Montana Max

Age: Looks to be in his late 20's (26-27) (around 80)

Gender: Male

Physical appearance: Fairly short yet round man with a rather charasmatic presence. Blone Hair combined with a very daring set of golden eyes. Herr Major is rarely ever seen not showing his bright white teeth as his constant thoughts of var keeps that ever so evil smirk perched upon his face which peers into the night through a large set of thick specticles.

Clothing of choice: Herr Major is always seen in a white suit of sorts sporting a brown tie pinned with a rather interesting rank pin. A white trench coat nearly matching something you expect in length for a musical conductor to wear as it nearly eclipses his feet from the rear. To go with his white trousers the SS officer has decided to also wear a pair of white officers boots of which you can hear the hobnails hit the floor with every step. Herr Major also sports a pair of white gloves which he wears constantly along with glasses nearly as thick as a coca-cola bottle.

Weaponry of choice: Heer Major sports nothing more then the typical Luger, not to be over taken as his main weapon however is the massive Battalion at his command. He may carry a few other standard issue weapons, but is rarely seen with anything other then his gloves and glasses.

Race: Cyborg

Abilities: Charisma: Herr Major has the ability to lead men to their deaths without any objection at all from his subjects. Being able to give speeches that would lead the most inocent of beings to be enraged and begin violent actions. His men, ever so ready to fight to begin with, feed off of this charismatic nature and march straight to their deaths without thought or second judgement, being able to speak smoothly and absolutely flawlessly.

Herr major can not shoot to save his own life. Period.

Organization: Millenium

Personality: Being of the standard SS type, that being a physcopathic being with an unobtainable thirst for blood and violence, the thought and sight of war ever increases the smirk on his face as he listens to the death of his own soldiers and his enemies. He would send a thousand men to die to kill one person just meerly to achvieve the objective, their lives matter not to him so as long as he can watch the battle. He is such a maniac that during the middle of a battle he was seen on top of his zepplin "Conducting" the war as if it were this great symphony of destruction. He has also been noted due to his pudgy nature for his cheeks puffing with every cackle, such a sadistic laugh, ready to command the legions of hell itself. The major has a rather large appetite as well, known to consume a steak while his men burn london to the ground. Though through all of his maddened intentions he still has manners and greets everyone as if he was a normal human being, however, as humble his voice was, he was quick to belittle his enemy, namely Integra. As much as a monster that he can be, he can still be a rather gentle being, kind of an odd creature given his agenda.

Rank: Sturmbannf├╝hrer

Biography: Born in the 1920s, Montana Max was born to a rather violent household, his mother being a prostitute, and his father being a drunk, generated a rather troubling child hood for the young major. After his father's death, his mother continued her "Work" which enraged the young man into killing his mother and her customer. The Major became indifferent to all types of violent and immorale acts. After wandering the streets, somehow the young man was found by Adolf Hitler himself, who made the man into an Luetnant.

Montana Max was deployed on the eastern front and was involved in Operation Barbarossa. He was mortally wounded in battle following a failure on his part, Herr Doktor was able to transfer most of his will into a new cybernetic body that would soon be charged with a new duty entirely.

A former first lieutenant of the SS, Adolf Hitler issued a special order (#666) placing him in charge of a top-secret project, the main focus of which was the perfection of an artificial vampirization process. The success of this project would allow the Nazis to utilize vampires in battle and turn the tide of the war in their favor. The operation was attacked and shut down by a young Walter Dornez and Alucard in Warsaw, Poland, in 1944. However, the defeat proved to be only a minor setback, as the Major and his subordinates managed to escape to South America unharmed. There they resumed their research.

Although other Nazi officers with higher ranks accompanied Millennium to their South American hideout and attempted to exert their authority, the vampire officers loyal to the Major quickly executed them. Depending on the translation used, the Major is variously a sub-commander or the founder of Millennium, as well as the leader of a Werwolf special force.

RP sample:

Herr Major valked calmly zhrough zhe hallz of his mighty zepplin vith his hand held at a position of salute zhe entire vay as he passed the many ranks of his battallion, his boots that nearly resembled vhite dress shoes clicked vith every step, it vas such a powerful vay he carried himself, such an inspiration to his men. "Az you vere men, az you vere, I have much buisness to attend to" he said in a calm voice. He vas headed to zie command room so he may carry out several small missions he had planned. As he passed the labratory Herr Doktor saluted and followed in close suit behind zie major.

Doktor, how are zhe men?
Doing vell major, ve're going on a thousand strong and growing sir
Excellent, the more paints i have to use of zhe canvas of var zhe better a masterpiece i can make.

Herr Major grinned sadistically at the thought of having a grand battallion at his command vonce again, his smirk spread nearlly vrom ear to ear showing almost every single glowing vhite tooth at zhe zhought of raising hell. He vas giddy vith excitement as he saw the entrance to the command room, it vas time to start a minor piece of artvork.


He enter zhe room vith his chin held high and his zhick spectacles resting triumphently upon his pudy nose. His smirk grew even larger as he saw his higher ranking offizers running about zheir business and suddenly stopping as almost being frozen in time to salute zhe Major, he saluted in return and valked to zhe middle of zhe room to stand before zhe ever immortalized emblem of zhe reich.

Gut evening gentlemen, it appears i have zome vork for a few of you tonight, its but a minor yet note vorzhy piece of art amongst zhe grand gallery of zhe battlefeild. Tonight ve shall put a bug in our enemies ear, it is much more vun to vatch vhen your enemy knows of your existance yet hasn't the slightest clue vhen or vhere zheir death vill occur. Tonight my friends your mission is to go into serveral small towns of your choozing and vaid several households creating ghouls along zhe vay, anyvon you turn into a vampire bring back vith you, let zhe ghouls run a muck in the streets for zhem to vorry about.

Zhe offizers saluted and returned to zheir business and prepared for zheir small invasion. Zhe Major rather entertained about zhe zthought sat in his chair, folded his hands togezger and awaited zhe beging of anozher piece of art.

Battle Sample:

Zhe Major, during one of his most insane moments, vas standing atop his zepplin vatching the battle as if it vere a giant movie theater. Ever giddy with excitement, he clapped as he saw explosion after explosion. One of Iscariots helicopters decided to drop off a pair of men.

Do you veally zhink you can just step onto my ship and kill me?

Herr Major pulled out his luger, though he knew he couldn't shoot it vell, but zhey didn't know zhat. The two men charged him, he opened fire in a rather sparatic spray causing the one man to jump and slide off the zepplin. The other one jumped over the major and landed behind him. The major using the time he had while the man was in the air to reload his weapon.

Why aren't you a razher energetic creature?

A helicopter hovered up next to the zepplin to watch the major meet his fate, the man charged the major, suddenly a panzerfaust round hit the helicopter, debris flew everywhere pricking at the light armor of the zepplin, a prop blade flew over top of the zepplin taking out the holy warrior inches from Herr Major.

Don't you people get zit, Hitler could not be killed in 1944 by a simple bomb, and you can not kill me vith a simple soldzer eizher.

Herr major grinned and continued to conduct zhe war much to his subbordanant's surprise.


Last edited by Nathan Heydt "Mirage" on Sat Sep 10, 2011 12:29 am; edited 6 times in total (Reason for editing : Edited, TRY 2)
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PostSubject: Re: Herr Major; Ready to vote!   Fri Sep 09, 2011 10:37 pm

Have you see the OVA or read the manga series of Hellsing? 1-4 [b]
Fine.

[b]Name: Herr Major; Montana Max
That's his name.

Age: Looks to be in his late 20's (26-27) (actually 90-91 years of age)
Apparent age is fine, but he's around 80, not 90.

Gender: Male
Normally I like to make the joke about girly looking men in anime, but it's pretty much definite he's a guy...

Physical appearance: Fairly short yet round man with a rather charasmatic presence. Blone Hair combined with a very daring set of brown eyes. Herr Major is rarely ever seen not showing his bright white teeth as his constant thoughts of var keeps that ever so evil smirk perched upon his face which peers into the night through a large set of thick specticles.
His eyes are gold, not brown.

Clothing of choice: Herr Major is always seen in a white suit of sorts sporting a brown tie pinned with a rather interesting rank pin. A white trench coat nearly matching something you expect in length for a musical conductor to wear as it nearly eclipses his feet from the rear. To go with his white trousers the SS officer has decided to also wear a pair of white officers boots of which you can hear the hobnails hit the floor with every step. Herr Major also sports a pair of white gloves which he wears constantly.
Glasses.

Weaponry of choice: Heer Major sports nothing more then the typical Luger, not to be over taken as his main weapon however is the massive Battalion at his command. He may carry a few other standard issue weapons, but is rarely seen with anything other this is gloves and glasses.
Fine

Race: Cyborg
Fine

Abilities: Charisma: Herr Major has the ability to lead men to their deaths without any objection at all from his subjects. Being able to give speeches that would lead the most inocent of beings to be enraged and begin violent actions. His men, every so ready to fight to begin with, feed off of this charismatic nature and march straight to their deaths without thought or second judgement.
You don't mention his crappy aim or his speaking abilities. Charisma is one thing, but if he clumsily stumbled over his lines like Christian Bale, no one would follow him.

Organization: Millenium
I'd hope so.

Personality: Being of the standard SS type, that being a physcopathic being with an unobtainable thirst for blood and violence, the thought and sight of war ever increases the smirk on his face as he listens to the death of his own soldiers and his enemies. He would send a thousand men to die to kill one person just meerly to achvieve the objective, their lives matter not to him so as long as he can watch the battle. He is such a maniac that during the middle of a battle he was seen on top of his zepplin "Conducting" the war as if it were this great symphony of destruction. He has also been noted due to his pudgy nature for his cheeks puffing with every cackle, such a sadistic laugh, ready to command the legions of hell itself.
Pretty short. Give me more insight on him; you don't mention his compulsive eating, his casual nature, his interactions with people, etc.

Rank: Sturmbannf├╝hrer
Indeed.

Biography: Born during the years of 1913 or 1914, Montana max grew up in a troubled home with an alcoholic father and a mother who worked as a prostitute that received clients in their own home. After his father's death, his mother continued her adultery by engaging in sexual services for various men. This incident led the young Major to grab his father's pistol and kill his mother and her client. He then wandered the streets homeless until he was found by Adolf Hitler and made into a lieutenant. These incidents led The Major to become indifferent towards rape, sex, and acts of violence, a trait his mother had shared when she showed indifference to the death of The Major's father.
Copied off the wiki. I'd say plagiarized, but I can't find that text any longer, even though I remember reading it word for word.

A former first lieutenant of the SS, Adolf Hitler issued a special order (#666) placing him in charge of a top-secret project, the main focus of which was the perfection of an artificial vampirization process. The success of this project would allow the Nazis to utilize vampires in battle and turn the tide of the war in their favor. The operation was attacked and shut down by a young Walter Dornez and Alucard in Warsaw, Poland, in 1944. However, the defeat proved to be only a minor setback, as the Major and his subordinates managed to escape to South America unharmed. There they resumed their research.
You don't mention his transformation into a cyborg at all or his loss near the end of the war.

Although other Nazi officers with higher ranks accompanied Millennium to their South American hideout and attempted to exert their authority, the vampire officers loyal to the Major quickly executed them. Depending on the translation used, the Major is variously a sub-commander or the founder of Millennium, as well as the leader of a Werwolf special force.
Hole above.

RP sample:

Herr Major valked calmly zhrough zhe hallz of his mighty zepplin vith his hand held at a position of salute zhe entire vay as he passed the many ranks of his battallion, his boots that nearly resembled vhite dress shoes clicked vith every step, it vas such a powerful vay he carried himself, such an inspiration to his men. "Az you vere men, az you vere, I have much buisness to attend to" he said in a calm voice. He vas headed to zie command room so he may carry out several small missions he had planned. As he passed the labratory Herr Doktor saluted and followed in close suit behind zie major.

Doktor, how are zhe men?
Doing vell major, ve're going on a thousand strong and growing sir
Excellent, the more paints i have to use of zhe canvas of var zhe better a masterpiece i can make.

Herr Major grinned sadistically at the thought of having a grand battallion at his command vonce again, his smirk spread nearlly vrom ear to ear showing almost every single glowing vhite tooth at zhe zhought of raising hell. He vas giddy vith excitement as he saw the entrance to the command room, it vas time to start a minor piece of artvork.


He enter zhe room vith his chin held high and his zhick spectacles resting triumphently upon his pudy nose. His smirk grew even larger as he saw his higher ranking offizers running about zheir business and suddenly stopping as almost being frozen in time to salute zhe Major, he saluted in return and valked to zhe middle of zhe room to stand before zhe ever immortalized emblem of zhe reich.

Gut evening gentlemen, it appears i have zome vork for a few of you tonight, its but a minor yet note vorzhy piece of art amongst zhe grand gallery of zhe battlefeild. Tonight ve shall put a bug in our enemies ear, it is much more vun to vatch vhen your enemy knows of your existance yet hasn't the slightest clue vhen or vhere zheir death vill occur. Tonight my friends your mission is to go into serveral small towns of your choozing and vaid several households creating ghouls along zhe vay, anyvon you turn into a vampire bring back vith you, let zhe ghouls run a muck in the streets for zhem to vorry about.

(If you guys need more RP samples say so, since the major is constantly surrounded by his subbordantant's, i haven't a clue how i'd RP him in fight, if you guys want me to i could probably come up with something.)
You can figure something out. Even Schroedinger could make something.

Fix all this, bitte.
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PostSubject: Re: Herr Major; Ready to vote!   Fri Sep 09, 2011 11:45 pm

Just like to point out he wasn't polite to Integra at all; he was incredibly condescending in calling her "fraulein".
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PostSubject: Re: Herr Major; Ready to vote!   Sat Sep 10, 2011 12:01 am

Edited, anything else? Also, I'll make an account if/when approved
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PostSubject: Re: Herr Major; Ready to vote!   Sat Sep 10, 2011 10:33 am

Seeing as Artisto decided he'd keep Major for a while instead of being a temp, this is disapproved.
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