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PostSubject: THC done   Wed May 25, 2011 3:10 am

Have you see the OVA or read the manga series of Hellsing? If so how far have you gotten? If not please direct your attention to youtube, and watch OVA 1-4 at least. Warning: If you have watched the anime we require you watch the OVA, or read the manga. The anime is not canon. This is not our opinion. This is the law set down by the creator of Hellsing, Kouta Hirano.
OVA up to 7

Name:
Tetrahydrocannabinol (THC)

Age:
17

Gender:
Male

Physical appearance:
Spoiler:
 

First wardrobe(Casual)(stands at 6 foot tall):
Head:
Firstly to be noted, is that he does not have a left eye per-say. Instead, he has a pupil-less looking eye. Next, to be noted is that he has brown hair that reaches to the bottom of the neck. Nothing else is really worth mentioning on his head, except for the fact that he has a brown pupil.

Upper Torso:
This is the interesting part. He wears a long sort of coat with frayed bottoms. It's not exactly frayed though. It has several tails that end off in a silver arrow head mounted to each tail's final destination with 8 tails total. Next, he wears a glove on his right arm that is attached to a gauntlet embedded with a blade on the bottom. This blade is seen in the picture under his right arm. This is designed to hold off blades with his arm so he may keep his other hand free if need be. Now, on his left arm, he wears an over sized gauntlet. This covers his fingers to his elbow where it tapers off in to a small spike like object. To be noted, the fingers are as sharp as knives.

Lower Torso:
Lower torso. This is indeed another interesting place to comment. He wears brown dress pants with a sort of thick leather belt over his waist. Under his pants are two full length tribal tattoos that cover both his legs. Over his white socks, he wears brown boots sort of like combat boots. However, these are not Knee high and only ankle high. They ARE steel toed mind you.

Second Wardrobe:
-Of course some of this will be reiteration, such as "head"-

Head:
Firstly to be noted, is that he does not have a left eye per-say. Instead, he has a pupil-less looking eye. Next, to be noted is that he has brown hair that reaches to the bottom of the neck. Nothing else is really worth mentioning on his head, except for the fact that he has a brown pupil.

Upper Torso:
This time around, he wears a long overcoat of the cloth type. It's a special sort of cloth however, made for comfort and easy movement. This cloth is silky on the inside and yet smooth on the outside. The inside of this overcoat is black as well as the outside and it reaches to the back of his knees. The coat is "Single breasted" if you will, with one set of buttons. These buttons being black and of course the same as any other, just buttons. Under his overcoat, he wears a white dress shirt made of the same fine material that his overcoat is. He also wears gloves made of the same material as well..

Bottom Torso:
Here, he wears his already established pants, slightly baggy. This being his established preferred make, such as the silken inside. He's fond of his boots, so he continues to wear them, but on occasion he wears special dress shoes of the same make. All of his clothes are made to allow him free movement and comfort at the same time, thus making him able to stand doing what he does with little problems other than his opponents.

Clothing of choice:
See Pic

Weaponry of choice:
Standard Katana
This was made in a standard Katana only with Demasacus steel.

Nodachi
Made the way of a standard Nodachi, this Damasacus steel blade was constructed to be five feet long from the blade and an aditinal three feet for the tsuka.

Battle hammer
Spoiler:
 
This hammer is constructed of the finest Material found in Japan. Made along the same lines of the standard Samurai Katana. Demasacus steel was used instead of regular steel though.

Tanto
This is a standard steel Tanto

Race:
Vampire

Abilities:


Zenzaigen:
(Note, this is activated at will not passive unlike the next ability.
Ability 1-This is the main basic ability that a Zenzeigan posses and is needed to perform all other techniques that the Zenzeigan can perform. When the Zenzeigan is active, a white nine pointed star replaces the pupil as it allows the user sees the world in a different setting, as if everything has a basic outlined shape to it although it allows the user to see the true nature of every being associated with the seal that they represent. The ability formation, allows the user to write a seal with his eyes, designating where, and what kanji they use specifically.


Ability 2-With the indigestion of the DNA of a someone other than himself, THC uses his Zenzeigan to unlock the Kanji that he only able to see initially. The User Associates the others Kanji with his own, allowing a wealth of information to flow worth and to be able to be stored within their own seal which lies dormant to THC. Being able to be recalled upon at any time.(To answer your question, the information passed is any information they know. It can't be metagamed that I know what that person knows.)


(Note:These abilities are gained and leveled through ranking up in the categories.)
Innate abilities:
Sublimation/animal Morphing:
He is able to transform at will, to any organic or chemical thing. Such as, he can form in to a tiger, or he can form in to a mist. The mist allows him to remain unharmed by conventional means.(Gained at C)


Acid Generation:
This is where his saliva, to others, is highly acidic. This allows him to eat just about anything. The corrosive acid will eat away at even steel. However, of course he can't spit on a bullet. It's moving too fast. However, if this spit gets on you, it can eat through your arm in 6 posts. It does not go more than the spot it eats through though. If it gets placed on the arm. It will eat a hole the side of the saliva through the arm. It will not denigrate through the whole arm and body.(This is auto gained.)

Duplication:
Able to make up to, depending on category, a number of himself. This ranges from 1-4 other than himself. From Categories B-Nosferatu Until B, he is unable to access this ability.


Phasing:
This is gained at A. He is able to Phase through inanimate objects at will. However, it will take at least 1 post cd before it can be done again.


Organization:
Merc

Personality:
He's been known to eat and drink the blood of his opponent, while they are alive. Also to note, is that he has room for only 2 people, who can command him. Also, there is always a chance for one other, though it would be someone who earned his respect as well as fight well with him, and it wouldn't help if they had the same interests, even at least a little. Also to be noted is that he's highly masochistic. Taking pleasure in the self pain of himself. Also, adding to this, he has a great love for blood. Calling it Red Wine. This isn't where it stops. He will drain his opponent dry of blood and put it in bottles labeled "Red Wine" and drink it later. He us indifferent about others and sees all as another type of to be food, or not thing worth bothering at all. Next to be noted, is that he tends to keep to himself when he finds it the need.

Rank:
F

Biography:
The male was an interesting person. His history that of an enigma to even himself. This was because of the fact that he was but a lonely child as a boy. Even though this was true, he never did let his guard down. He kept strong and used what he had to in order to get by.

When he became a Vampire he loved how it was. He had problems with everything in the light if it happening fast. However, even this didn't cause him to levee his own will to make himself stronger and become better. Till this day he tries to better himself be it by killing or not. And now, it's up to history to play out.

RP sample:

The male stopped to see the sights. The male was a little odd even though he stood six feet tall. The male jumped up and down a little bit. The male pissed in a can. The male walked away and made himself disappear.

The male jumped. The male dodged a knife. The male ran around. The male looked at the enemy. The male jumped to avoid a bullet. The male died.

The male sat on a bench. The male looked to his left. The male had looked to his right. The male thought about eating. The male left to go to the nearest Mikky D's.


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PostSubject: Re: THC done   Wed May 25, 2011 7:56 am

1) I want a written description of the physical appearence and clothing to go along with the picture.

2) Tell me what your weapons are made out of (steel, iron, silver?)

3) Lengthen the RP sample.
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PostSubject: Re: THC done   Wed May 25, 2011 3:43 pm

May I point out that I need not do these things. Because, and allow me to quote your own rules:

1)
The Template wrote:

(Self-descriptive; height, eye color, hair color, weight, build, etc. Please be creative.)

Nowhere does it say here that I don't have to place a picture instead of writing. It just says be creative.

2)
The Template wrote:

(What your character prefers to wield, be it a special weapon or a normal weapon. Special weapons are unique, but magical weapons are harshly frowned upon, therefore if you must pick a magical weapon, don't make it all Final Fantasy-ish, it'll be slapped with automatic Disapproval.)

It does not say I need specify the structure of said objects used for my malicious intent.

3) I will add one more paragraph. After reading it for a second time, it says 3 posts. I apologize for that. I had thought it read 2.

At any rate, I have followed the rules and after adding my last paragraph should be approved.


In no way is this trying to be asinine or anything. I'm just following the rules of the forum. However, I do have a few things ready to make the app more presentable, however, it should be approved with out them. because I'm following the rules.
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PostSubject: Re: THC done   Wed May 25, 2011 3:45 pm

And added the rest of the rp sample.
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PostSubject: Re: THC done   Wed May 25, 2011 3:47 pm

While I appreciate your professionalism, I'm afraid I won't budge on this. I'm telling you to provide written descriptions, this is not negotiable. I hope you will be willing to cooperate. If not, it'll unfortunately be a disapproval from me.
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PostSubject: Re: THC done   Wed May 25, 2011 4:07 pm

Corrections are made, however, I myself will not budge on the further aspect of the rp sample with good reason.
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PostSubject: Re: THC done   Wed May 25, 2011 5:22 pm

Added some things. Some interesting things.
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PostSubject: Re: THC done   Wed May 25, 2011 9:31 pm

Thank you for adding those written descriptions as I asked. I just have a few more points of clarification before I make my final vote.

1) In regards to this "Zenzaigen", I'd like a bit more explanation of what it does exactly. My current understanding is that (in its' base form) it allows you to immediately determine the race and abilities of anyone you see. However, I'd like more information on this line "The ability formation, allows the user to write a seal with his eyes, designating where, and what kanji they use specifically." Please explain what the purpose of writing the kanji is. Finally, in the Zenzaigen's second form, please elaborate on the line "allowing a wealth of information to flow worth and to be able to be stored within their own seal which lies dormant to THC." What sort of information are you gaining? Organization plans? Memories? Fighting techniques?

2) As for your additional ranked abilities my opinions are as follows:
Sublimation/Animal Morphing - make it cat C
Reactive adaption/Evolution - No. Scrap it.
Acid Generation - No complaints from me.
Duplication - No. If anything make it a Cat B or A ability.
Phasing - I have no problem with that being a Cat A ability.

3) I'd like more information in the biography detailing how he became a vampire and such a skilled warrior. Along with that, I must once again ask that you extend you RP sample. I understand that you are using a somewhat poetic writing style but the purpose of the sample is to show the staff how you intend to rp with the character alongside other members of the forum and though it may be creative, posts consisting entirely of poems will not be allowed.
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PostSubject: Re: THC done   Thu May 26, 2011 5:45 pm

1/3 Edits complete
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PostSubject: Re: THC done   Fri May 27, 2011 7:23 pm

1.5/3 Edits complete
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PostSubject: Re: THC done   Thu Jun 02, 2011 7:41 pm

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Race:
Vampire

What category?

Important [LINK]

Nice appearance.

Okay on the weapons.

Quote :
Abilities:


Zenzaigen:
(Note, this is activated at will not passive unlike the next ability.
Ability 1-This is the main basic ability that a Zenzeigan posses and is needed to perform all other techniques that the Zenzeigan can perform. When the Zenzeigan is active, a white nine pointed star replaces the pupil as it allows the user sees the world in a different setting, as if everything has a basic outlined shape to it although it allows the user to see the true nature of every being associated with the seal that they represent. The ability formation, allows the user to write a seal with his eyes, designating where, and what kanji they use specifically.


Ability 2-With the indigestion of the DNA of a someone other than himself, THC uses his Zenzeigan to unlock the Kanji that he only able to see initially. The User Associates the others Kanji with his own, allowing a wealth of information to flow worth and to be able to be stored within their own seal which lies dormant to THC. Being able to be recalled upon at any time.(To answer your question, the information passed is any information they know. It can't be metagamed that I know what that person knows.)


(Note:These abilities are gained and leveled through ranking up in the categories.)
Innate abilities:
Sublimation/animal Morphing:
He is able to transform at will, to any organic or chemical thing. Such as, he can form in to a tiger, or he can form in to a mist. The mist allows him to remain unharmed by conventional means.(Gained at C)


Acid Generation:
This is where his saliva, to others, is highly acidic. This allows him to eat just about anything. The corrosive acid will eat away at even steel. However, of course he can't spit on a bullet. It's moving too fast. However, if this spit gets on you, it can eat through your arm in 6 posts. It does not go more than the spot it eats through though. If it gets placed on the arm. It will eat a hole the side of the saliva through the arm. It will not denigrate through the whole arm and body.(This is auto gained.)

Duplication:
Able to make up to, depending on category, a number of himself. This ranges from 1-4 other than himself. From Categories B-Nosferatu Until B, he is unable to access this ability.


Phasing:
This is gained at A. He is able to Phase through inanimate objects at will. However, it will take at least 1 post cd before it can be done again.

Okay... here's where I get a little bit confused. Confused because you didn't put a category F, E, or D in the RACE section. If these abilities were tacked onto anything lower than a C ranking vampire, I'd shred this sheet apart and automatically disapprove it. If you said you were a category C or higher vampire, I'd still automatically disapprove mainly because as a rule here, it is quite rare for an application to be a category C+ vampire right off the bat.

Now if you plan on gaining these abilities as you stack up and rank up slaughter points in the game... then this is a little bit different. I could not quite understand what you meant. If you plan on gaining these abilities as you rank up with slaughter points, I highly suggest you clear what you do not need in this sheet application. When you rank up, simply make an updated application of abilities. From there, we can unlock your sheet for 24-72 hours and you can add them into your first and original sheet.

Quote :
Rank:
F

This is your rank within the organization and has nothing to do with race rank. Please move this to the race section and put in this section something like second lieutenant or grunt. Whichever or whatever you wish. Its like a second title section.

Personality, good. Pretty explanatory and to the point.

Bio, as Anderson said, flesh it out.

RP Sample, as Anderson said, flesh it out.

Other than that, good job so far. These are just the pros and cons as I see them that might need some more work or clearing up please.
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PostSubject: Re: THC done   Thu Jun 02, 2011 11:23 pm

And just remembered, why tetrahydrocannabinol as a name?
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PostSubject: Re: THC done   Mon Jun 06, 2011 9:05 pm

I give this 7 days for signs of further edits being made, else I will disapprove it.
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PostSubject: Re: THC done   Fri Jun 17, 2011 5:08 pm

My biggest problem with this is also the RP sample. There is almost nothing there. Yes, you made edits but it wasn't particularly exciting to read. The appearance needs more active descriptors in it and on top of that, you have a weed reference for your name. I'm sorry but I get kind of confused on this character sheet. For this reason and the fact that there have already been several edits to it with no success, I will have to disapprove of this character. If you flesh out things more, I might change my mind but for now...

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PostSubject: Re: THC done   Thu Jun 23, 2011 2:17 pm

THC has been gone for some time with no departure message. I'm giving this sheet another 24 hours before I move it to the Disapproval section.
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