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PostSubject: Cobra commanders charcter sheet [crossover] Finished    Fri May 20, 2011 7:36 pm

Have you see the OVA or read the manga series of Hellsing? If so how far have you gotten? If not please direct your attention to youtube, and watch OVA 1-4 at least. Warning: If you have watched the anime we require you watch the OVA, or read the manga. The anime is not canon. This is not our opinion. This is the law set down by the creator of Hellsing, Kouta Hirano. yes all manga OVA and anime

Name:unknow alias Cobra Commander and chrome dome thanks to his mask he wears



Age:apperas to be in his late 40s


Gender:male


Physical appearance:average, physically fit Caucasian with a pony tail, and a long slender mustache. He has tattos of a large cobra on his back and cheast he has two large scars gong down both arms his face is scarred horribly from a bad allyway run in he has scars going down his legs and stomach also he is missing his big toe on his left foot



Clothing of choice:he wears sometimes a long flowing black trenchcoat that has 10 pockets he stiched in with his mirror-faced battle mask that strikes fear into his enemeys it also has two cobras on both sides of the mask he also wears a light blue army suit stitched wth a big red cobra on the chest area under his trenchcoat with a long flowing black cape with black army boots with cobras on both sides he also wears a cap with the cobra symbol on it he wears kevlar body armour under his army suit he also wears gloves that can be charged to fire electricity







mask close up

Weaponry of choice:Uselly carries a two MK2 pistol that rapidly fires 9mm bulliets [each engraved with your dead] at foes and sometimes carries a sword [engraved with the words god death and honour] with him and a staff if the sword is not needed he also carries some incendiary grenades and normal grenades he carries a 2 revolvers and 1 MP5K sub machine gun thanks to the pockets he stitched in he carries 12 rounds for his revolvers 10 clips for his pistol and 20 clips for his MP5K he also has gloves that fires electricity but requires a massive charge
from solor power fully charged by two days



MK2 pistole




Swoard



MP5K



2 revolvers


gloves


Race:Human

Abilities:They display feats typical of that of humans, they aren't so strong but they make it up with versatility... or not. Although some humans may possess supernatural abilities through experimental means, those sort of humans are rare although, and are often called mutants.He also has great aim and speed also a brillant statgic mind and great refelxes with strengh and agillity he can adjust a situaton very quicky with speed and efficiently

[b]Organization:
wild geese


Personality:he spares no one as he is ruthless a most feared man alive also a brillant mind he is very troubled by his past and has no side for humanity or anything else but the geese and his battle comrades that he is very royal to he has a no retreat no surronder attitude with a die hard spirit as well as a shock and awe mind

Rank:second commander of the wild geese

Biography:Much of Cobra Commander's early origins, such as his birth name and childhood, are unrevealed. By all appearances he was born an American citizen sometime in the mid-twentieth century, his only known relative an older brother named Dan to which he had a strong attachment.He also had a great thing for snakes usally keeping ones he captured as pets. Dan enlisted in the military during the Vietnam War and volunteered for repeated tours in order to spare his younger sibling from being drafted (federal policy being that only one sibling per family could serve in combat). During this time, the man who would become Cobra Commander worked as a used car salesman struggling to keep his business afloat. When Dan returned from Vietnam, he displayed deep psychological trauma caused by his war experiences, and took to drinking heavily and engaging in self-destructive behavior, especially reckless driving. This ended tragically when Dan crashed head-on into another car, killing himself and a family of three. Devastated by the loss of his brother, the future Cobra Commander refused to see any responsibility on the part of Dan for the accident (and by extension, any guilt for himself for being the ultimate cause of Dan's condition). He perversely blamed the family in the other car and their only survivor, another war veteran who the family had been traveling to the airport to pick-up when they were killed by Dan. Becoming obsessed with this soldier, the young Cobra Commander formed elaborate revenge schemes against him.He tracked the former soldier to japan were he tracked him down and killed him finding no were else to go.He meet a wild geese soldier named Carl blowtise a young french men which he talked about a merc company named the wild geese.A young cobra commander asked what if he could join the company Carl acepted him into the geese he was ready to be thurst into battle with the wild geese.Were he rose up from the ranks to become a commander royal to the geese and the geese only fighting in battle after battle.He also started a company in car making and his quite rich thanks to his company



RP sample:As cobra commander walked down the street hs trench coat blowing in the wind he talked to himself about how he will forge a new fraction as he walked he also said "Its damn cold today"he called a cab then asked the driver to go to london east side.The cab just pasted big ben when it was attacked by some thugs called lost and dead as Cobra commander jumped out of the way he throw his trench coat off and started fireing at the thugs.He managed to hit three out of 5 of them he then said "HAHAHAHAAHAHHAHA you fools cannot harm me I am the great cobra commander"he then charged the remaining thugs and stabbed them to death he then brushed his hands off and went back to walking to the east coast of london.He then said "going to be a long day" he walked all the way to the river of london were he enterd a warehouse filled wth mobsters as he aimed at the main mobster he took shoot cutting the power as well with his left hand.The bullet hit its mark as he ran down off the crates and started sliceing the mobsters that were blinded from the darkness he then sat on a chair smokeing a cigar "well well I am done here". He said after takeing money from some of the dead bodies.


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PostSubject: Re: Cobra commanders charcter sheet [crossover] Finished    Sat May 21, 2011 4:37 pm

As for the reasons mentioned in your last application that you never addressed and the completely unacceptable length of your appearance, clothing, weaponry, abilities, and personality, I am not accepting this.

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PostSubject: Re: Cobra commanders charcter sheet [crossover] Finished    Sat May 21, 2011 5:24 pm

I agree with Casamiro in that the various sections of this sheet need much more detail to meet the standard. In addition to that, what I have seen of this character doesn't seem to fit the org. He's a terrorist mastermind, what in God's Name is he doing serving in the Wild Geese mercenary unit? If you could flesh out the individual sections of the app and elaborate more on why he is a good fit for the Geese I might be willing to change my vote but for now I must disapprove.

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PostSubject: Re: Cobra commanders charcter sheet [crossover] Finished    Sat May 21, 2011 5:47 pm

see thats the thing may I not join any groups so I can fit in
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PostSubject: Re: Cobra commanders charcter sheet [crossover] Finished    Mon May 23, 2011 9:23 pm

... Forgot the [/b] on your application dude. As well as [/u]. Trying to help ya out here best I can, but it's becoming imposable young blood.

You have to use the format we require. And you have to work at it. I suggest you start out with something simple and not so elaborate. Try a simple human with a simple specialty that could help Hellsing. Even more so, you could try a simple priest oc for Iscariot. Take a personality from a vampire series and use it for the personality section.

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PostSubject: Re: Cobra commanders charcter sheet [crossover] Finished    Tue May 24, 2011 10:40 am

there [/b] and [/u] done
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PostSubject: Re: Cobra commanders charcter sheet [crossover] Finished    Tue May 24, 2011 3:00 pm

You're still not listening to us. You cannot simply make a couple formatting changes and expect us to approve this. Try actually reading what the moderators are trying to tell you and modifying your profile as we suggest. We've tried to work with you here, now work with us.
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